Writing I guess I'll post a few

[Hayate]

These are three poems I wrote a long time ago my friends like them but I want an unbaiased opinion tell me what you think


Permanent Vacation

It?s time to take a vacation,
One away from me
To pack my bags and go away
So no one can bother me.

Because the problems are unending,
There are even problems pending,
It?s time to take a vacation,
Never to return

No changes address I?m leaving
No new phone numbers I?m gone
Nobody knows when I?ll leave
Not a soul will know I?m gone
I?ve finally taken a vacation
A permanent vacation a final end to this song

Blue

Blue the color of the sky
Looking at the stars so high
And I feel them moving closer
Yet they?re still so far away

And yet all I can reach
Is the one thing I can?t see
Yeah., you can?t see love
But you can feel it

But now I?m in a dream
And I feel so free
Where?s there?s no black or white
Just blue
So please don?t wake me now
everything is so clear now
Oh so very clear

And yet I know it?s only a dream
And as funny as it seems
I don?t care

Dark Dreams

I know what darkness brings
Up from the depths of my soul
A heart not wiling to give in
To a past not long forgotten
Because the shadows are long
And unheeding
And my sins as black as they are
They keep my mind from dreaming
And when I wake up
Will I know from where


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Memories locked deep inside
Darkening the love I feel inside.
Frightened, Afraid to leave the nest
Who can put my pain to rest?

Who would even take the time to hear
My song,
My reason,
My rhyme.
To be the kind soul to plant the seed
The seed of kindness peace and joy
To be the one to give me love
A Love that can only be send from heaven above
Or could I be wrong?

Could love only be a guise of evil?
Causing pain hurt and apathy
Longing fear and loss
Things not new to me

So now I have a choice to make
Their ends I cannot see
To give myself over to love or
To keep myself for me?

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