Guest EikoTheWolf Posted January 5, 2004 Share Posted January 5, 2004 To live two lives, To die, What does it mean to exist? The friends we meet, The friends we lose, What does it mean to be alone? When dreams end and reality ensues, How do you know what is and what isn't? Is there really a world or is it just a dream... Our enemy our friend, our foe unknown... When does it end, when does it begin.. Who am I? [QUOTE]For all the dreamers, the dream is not over yet...[/QUOTE] To let you know now, sense I can assume there will be a measure of critiquing, this poem isn't ment to ryme, infact, I tryed to make it as vague as possible to capture the confustion of one unsure of there own existance. Oh, and I spell horribly and I oppoligize!!! Well, hope ya liked it! Later!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFameof_Dying Posted January 6, 2004 Share Posted January 6, 2004 Its pretty good sis, But you don't have to explain the rhyming thing here, In fact, Most of them don't like rhyming poems. Over all, I think that it was very nice, and i think that if serege did talk more often, He would say that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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