Writing My name is Yuna

[Guest Shaniqua Anime]

Chapter 1-A Date

Well, to start it off, my name is Shaniqua but call me Yuna. I'm a very evil:demon: person. I used to associate with evil. Here is where my story begins....

Yuna-Marik, what do you think about this plan to destroy Yami?

Marik-It is extraordinary and exactly who is supposed to put this plan into action?

Yuna-If your not, who is?

Marik-(waves the M. rod in my face threateningly)

Yuna-Alright, I guess I can do it this time.:shifty: You never send me out to be devious anymore.

Marik-Well, this is your chance to show me that I was wrong about the time you tried to steal Yami's Millennium puzzle.

Yuna-That was an accident. That Joey kid is so nosey!

-Meanwhile-

Yami-We should be worried about Marik and his next moves, not if some girl wants to go out with you.

Yugi-I'm on the phone, can't this wait?!

Yami-No, it can't wait!!:angry2:

Yugi-(ignoring Yami completlely)

Yami-LISTEN TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Yugi-(he finally hangs up the phone)We have a date tomorrow @ 2. Anyway, what were you yelling about?

Yami-Nothing.

-Tomorrow-

Yami-Why are we going on this date again?

Yugi-Because I like this girl and she likes me.(I walked up to Yugi not noticing the spirit)

Yuna-You must be my date, my name is Yuna.

Yugi-My name is Yugi...

Yuna-Yugi...your name is Yugi!!! Can you give me a minute to think?

Yugi-Okay.

Yuna-(I ran to the bathroom and pulled out my cellphone)Marik...Marik are you there?

Marik-Yeah, I'm here.

Yuna-I'm a date with Yugi Muto.

Marik-Really, this is interesting. I'll be there in 5. In the meantime, keep lil' Yugi occupied.

Yuna-Understood.(I went back to Yugi)Sorry about that:blush: .

[wiccansamurai]

I give up... There is no way I am getting anyone to write fanfics in a proper format. *sigh* This is the end.

That being said, I guess this might be an interesting read. Maybe. But then again, having never watched yu-gi-oh, I don't really understand. Of course, Joey-whatsisname made some pretty good yu-gi-oh fanfics I didn't need to see the show.... umm, back on topic, and back to the format thing. Description would be good. I'm so bored with all these fanfics being the same....

[Guest Shaniqua Anime]

Chapter 2-Flashback

Well, if you don't understand the consept then, here it is. Yugi

Muto is a boy that was given a Millennium item called the

millennium puzzle. He put it together because it was in pieces

when he got it, that's why they call it the M. puzzle. Anyway, the

spirit trapped inside chose him to be his host and ever since Yugi

and the Egyptian pharaoh, Yami, were together. But, before that

happened Yami was pharaoh and bad people who plotted

against him made him trap himself in one of seven millennium

items. The bad people took stone tablets that held monsters

inside of them and used them to defeat the pharaoh. About

3,000 years later, Maximilloin Pegasus redesigned those tablets

into cards and called the game duel monsters. Yugi, Yami, and his

friends Joey, Tea and Tristan went to the a tournament that

pegasus was holding and Yugi beat him. Kaiba was jealous of

Yugi because he stole his title of Duel Monsters Champion, so

Seto Kaiba is wanting revenge. Bakura has the millennium Ring

and he took Pegasus' M. Eye and that's just the begining.

[Mitch]

[size=1] Have you ever heard of quotation marks? Of paragraphs? Of the usage of sentences? Of thinking what the reader is going to know when they read something?

I'm also sick of fan fics like this.

Learn the basis of writing: an interconnected group of context, with more than just quotation marks, with paragaphs and sentences and punctuation. Oh yeah, and a spell check on it before you posted it never hurt anyone.

Who knows. I'm too lazy to read your fan fic or care due to the fact that its format is quite bare-boned and lacking. I mean, it's not as if I don't see this all the time. I don't even quite know why I'm typing this all up, because it's wasted words.

Improve the quality of the fan fic. It would help immensly. How long does it take to put effort into something you're going to post? Bleh.

Just mind me. I'm not meaning to be offensive or anything. Just improve it , please, or else I should just start closing these types of topics.[/size]