Writing Chocolate

[Sweet Pie]

[color=coral][b]This story is about Kaede's life. Chapter 1 up! Comment about them.
WARNING: Might not be suitable for younger readers.[/color][/b]


[SIZE=3]Chocolate++ Chapter 1: Johnny[/SIZE]

?My name is Kaede. Kaede Souichiro. I?m pleased to meet all of you.? I said nervously.
I sat back at my chair and stared out of the window. The teacher kept on talking about what, [i]who the hell knows![/i] Time passed so fast that I didn?t realize that its already dismissal time. Everyone exit the classroom except for me. I pick up my books and walk briskly to the door. [i]Whoah![/i] A lot of students out here. [i]I?d say it?s like goats being freed from the farm.[/i] Sighing, I walked slowly to my locker. Number 10. I opened it put my books and took my backpack and [i]slam![/i] The door closed. When I turned around, I bumped into something soft. He. [i]Yeah..a he.[/i] He was around 175cm tall. He was wearing a black sleeveless t-shirt and denim jeans. Medium-built. Muscular.
I realized that I was surrounded by five other guys. [i]Gulp. What are they going to do?[/i]
?Hey pretty! What?s your name? I?m Johnny by the way.? He said with a sly grin.
?I?m Kaede. What do you want?? I said bravely. But deep down inside, I knew I was trembling. [i]I?m feeling so naïve.[/i]
?Kaede..huh? I?ll love to taste cute Japanese girl like you?.? Johnny replied with that same old wicked grin. He took one step closer and I could smell peppermint and vanilla. Bet he just got a peppermint and vanilla ice-cream. Our eyes met. [i]Something was wrong.[/i] Actually, I don?t dare to look him in the eye.
Johnny placed his arms around my waist. Suddenly, I felt so tensed. He pushed his body against me and pinned me against the wall. I could feel [i]every[/i] part of his body. Muscular [i]everywhere. Damn! Why did I wear a denim slightly-above-the-knee skirt![/i] My heart beat so fast that I swear it was going to explode. He moved his hands up to my face and look me in the eye, studying my features. The locker area was already deserted. He then, placed his right palm on my thigh. The other pinning my left arm on the wall so that I could not move my left arm. [i]Someone help me![/i] His palms moved up. He cupped my butt [i]Damn! What am gonna do?[/i] While caressing my face, he moved closer and kissed my lips passionately.
[i]Okay, I admit that his lips were sexy and soft.[/i] I stared at his deep-green eyes. [i]Beautiful eyes.[/i] He smiled as though knowing that I was admiring his pair of eyes. I was not aware that he already unbuttoned my shirt and pushed it gently off the shoulder. Johnny kissed my neck and down the slope of my left shoulder. [i]I?ve got this tingling feeling running through me.[/i] He gently kissed my breast and freed my left hand and was about to slip both his hands under my skirt, [i]smack![/i] A nice tight slap from me. [i]Jerk![/i]
I grabbed my bag, run to the nearest toilet, put on my shirt properly and ran all the way home. [i]You deserve a slap for being a jerk![/i]


[i]I deserve it for being a little pervert. She?s no bimbo. From the looks, she's very brave but a little timid just
now. I really can?t help it. I?ve got strong desire towards her. My cheeks still hurts. If she hadn?t slap me an run off, I?d have done that with her. Who can ever forget those curvesand lips waiting to be kissed and caressed and kissed. Irresistable. Damn! I kept thinking of her. I think I?m falling for her. I don?t care if for the time being she?s not into me. But I?ll make her fall in love with me.

Johnny[/i]

[wiccansamurai]

Very descriptive ^_^;; I loved it!

All I can say is: She better have some reason for thinking that way. Because if I was her, I wouldn't have thought any of that with the "Okay, I admit that his lips were sexy and soft. " But I'm just odd. And almost a guy hater. Of course, I would of just burst into tears, not slapped him. So this character is nothing like me.

Er, I'm ranting, sorry. I just thought her thought process was odd ^_^;; Umm, I love your writing style, more or less! I'll say more later.

*Smacks herself for ranting on and on*

[Sweet Pie]

[color=coral]Thanks for the comment I'll try to seperate a paragraph from the other. But Can I ask you something? Do you feel like you're the the protaganist? Just asking. Just keep supporting me, ok?

[b]Chapter 2 will be up soon[/b][/color]

[wiccansamurai]

Of course I will keep supporting you! I'm really curious about what will happen next!

I felt more like the protagonist, being a girl and having been (Though not to the magnitude of being cornered in a hallway and, er, kissed) in a situation somewhat like that. And the character felt pretty believable, with her whole talking brave but still really afraid.

Write more soon! ^_^

[Sweet Pie]

[size=3][b]Chocolate ++ Chapter 2: Jesse Alvarez[/size][/b]


Today was a beautiful day. I looked around the school. Not a lot of people were there. I walk down the corridor and turned left. Not wanting [i]what[/i] happened yesterday, I looked around first and make sure Johnny And his friends were not there. Took the books that I needed and closed back the locker door.

I continued walking down the corridor past the principals office and turned right. I went to my table and sat down, staring out of the window. One by one came flooding the classroom.

Everyone was seated at their places except for the seat beside me. [i]I guess[/i] the [i]someone[/i] who was supposed to seat beside me was absent. Then out of nowhere, a tall guy, with short dark hair and tanned complexion, stepped into the classroom. I noticed that all the girls looked up at him with awe. He walked passed them unaware of the attention he got from the female students.

I just studied him. Those muscular arms hidden under those long-sleeve Calvin Klein shirt, could never shy away even under those shirt. He has this sexy, seducing brown eyes. [i]Of course[/i], not to forget the sexy lips. He looks like a model for Calvin Klein.

As if knowing I was staring at his features, he turned to me and smiled.

"My name is Jesse. Jesse Alvarez." he said and offering a handshake.
I shook his hand.
"I'm Kaede. Kaede Takeda." I said casually. But I know my heart was beating very fast as [i]I've[/i] never talked to a Latino hottie.

I knew was lucky out of all the girls in the whole universe. [i]Now, I'm sounding like a kid[/i]

Social studies was boring. I nearly fell asleep. Next we had this surprise test for geography. The bell rang. I put my pen down and waited for the teacher to come and collect the paper.[i]Everyone[/i] loves breaks. The teacher took my paper, took her things and walked out. I pushed my chair back, stood up and walked straight to the door. Unaware that there's a bag in front of me, I stumbled upon it and [i]crash![/i] I could feel my cheecks burning in my face. How can I be so clumsy infront of him?

"Are you okay, Kaede?" he said, concerned and sincere.
I was so embarrased. he pulled me up.
"Don't worry, I'm okay."I smiled at him, trying to hide the pain in my sprained right ankle.
"You don't look okay.." he put me down on the nearest chair, knelt down in front of me, put my sprained ankle on his lap. I was blushing.

He took something out of his jeans pocket. Ointment, I guess. He took off my sandals, massage the ointment and pulled my feet. [i]Crack![/i] I felt that my and feels better.

"Thanks" I said shyly.
"Don't worry, it's nothing." he replied with a slight smile.

I was about to walk out of the door, I saw him. Johnny. I froze on my tracks. Did he saw everything. There was no hint of smile on his face.

[i]Chapter 3 coming soon![/i]

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Hey. I really love how this story is going so far. Keep it up! I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Sweet Pie]

[color=red][size=3][b]Chocolate[/color] ++ Chapter 3: Solitude[/b][/size]

[size=1]
I was speechless.
"H..hi," I said and walked passed him.
I could feel his eyes folowing me.
Suddenly, a hand flew in front of me, halting my steps.
"You still don't get it, don't you?" he asked with a scowl painted on his face.

I stood there dumbfounded, with a gunuinely confused look. I [i]really[/i] don't know what he ws [i]talking[/i]
about.
"Wha..what do you want?" I asked back.
He looked away, "It's just that..," rubbing his palms on his jeans, "I..I got to go now.."

Then, he just turned around and walked off. It feels kind of weird, don't you think so? What was [i]he[/i] trying to tell
me? I got a blask ink on my forehead? At that moment, I wasn't afraid of him.

The canteen were packed. Half of the canteen were occupied by the seniors. I've been here for a week already. Here, in Rosewood
State Private High School, it's common to see the seniors, [i]conquering[/i] all the benches available. Back in Sakura Josui Academy, the seniors [i]usually[/i]
hang out at the park. I bought a diet coke and sat down at the end corner of the canteen. Did I tell you that I'm in ninth grade? Yeah I'm in ninth grade. I'll be fifteen
next week. My Dad's a businessman. He's always busy but still have time for me on the weekends. I'm his [i]only[/i] child. He's got pretty high expectations from me.
I glanced around me. They all were happy. Practically, [i]all[/i] of them were attached.I could never be happy like them. I've got no time for friends, [i]that's why I've lost all
my friends[/i]. Everyday was going out in solitude [i]or[/i] a date with my book, books and [i]more[/i] books.

I walked my way out of the school. Everyone was dismissed. The bell had just gone off a while ago. Nothing's interesting today. The sun was shinning brightly, melting my tanned skin.
The temperature was about thirty-three degrees celcius. Just in a few seconds, I'm already soaked in my own sweat. My hair stuck to the back of my neck. I just tied it up in to a ponytail. Tadaa!
Turn right and there stood a building of the colour sky-blue. It's a beautiful house.

No sign of the BMW car. Meaning my father was not at home. I [i]was[/i] dying of thrist. Walked down the living room and to the average-size kitchen. I swung open the refrigerator and got
myself a can of Soya Bean Milk. Something yellowish caught my attention.[/size]

[i]Dear Kaede,

Dad's got a meeting in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. Won't be back till next weekend. Take care of yourself and if you need to buy the groceries, get some cash in my drawer, okay?
Remember no boys allowed in the house.

Love,
Dad[/i]

[size=1]One [i]whole[/i] week [i]without[/i] Dad? It's going to be boring, because I've go no friends to spend time with. Especially not [i]that[/i] Johnny. My room is just to the right when you're
up the landing. My room was the colour of rose, not dark nor light, just the right balance. The bedcover was bay-blue color with graphics of cats. I [i]love[/i] cats! On my desk stood a Toshiba laptop,
the ones that can turn three hundred and sixty degrees. THe books shelf was beside my desk. Beyond the window, was a scenery of nature. It was full of daisie. Beautiul.

I shoved my homework on the desk and sat on the chair. As the sun set, the few thin strips of clouds on the horizon turned shimmering gold. I looked with awe. But something struck me that made my
heart sank. I [i]enjoyed[/i] the beautiful view of sunset [i]all[/i] alone. No [i]one[/i] special was there beside [i]me[/i]. [i]Wish there was one![/i]

The blue striped shirt I was wearing was sticking to my body, so peeled them and my jeans. My bra and panties were soaked in sweat, too. I tossed the dirty clothes in the laundry basket.

Cold water touched every surface and every curve of my body. It was refreshing that I felt like I wanted to sleep. I sliped in to a black cotton T-shirt and balck shorts. I sat by the mirror, studying my face. Blueish-green
pair of eyes and those raven black wavy and long hair. I inherited those eyes from my Mom. I really missed her. She's gone a long long time ago.

Now, I'm thinking. Did I [i]love[/i] Johnny? Obviously not. But I yearn for those kisses. All along, I didn't realize that I was falling for [i]someone[/i]. Who? [i]Jess[/i].

[i]Kring! Kring! Kring! Kring![/i]

"Hello? Souichiro resident." I said politely.
"May I speak to Kaede?" the voice asked huskily. The voice sounds familliar.
"Yes, speaking."
"Oh, Kaede! It's me Jesse. I think you dropped your maths worksheet. You know the ones that you have to do for homework and hand in tomorrow? Yeah, that's the one. Do you mind if I drop them by your house?
I'm on my way. I'll see youin a minute, okay?"

Man, he [i]was[/i] punctual. The next minute, he stood there by the door.
"Here's your worksheet. You're lucky I found it." he grinned at me.
"Thanks. It's nice of you."
He looked at me from top to toe.
"You looked and smelled good." he finally said.
"It..it's nothing. Pardon the way I dress." I was blushing.
Silence. His dark brown eyes bore into mine. He was closer to me. The next minute, we were kissing. I couldn't help myself but to kiss him back. Suddenly it was drizzling. We broke apart. Gasping. Immediately, the clouds
emptied its contents. Heavy rain.
I spoke to breake the silence. "It looks like it's not a good time for your to walk back home [i]even[/i] with an unbrella."
"I guess so. Hope you don't mind if I stay here for awhile until the rain stops? My Mom's not at home. So it shouldn't be a problem."
"Sure." Smiling to myself knowing I was very [i]lucky[/i]![/size]

[color=coral][b]Chapter 4 will be up soon. [i]I'm very sorry for long wait[/i].[/color][/b]

[Sweet Pie]

[color=red]Chocolate[/color] ++ Chapter 4: On my own

[size=1]Jesse was really, really sweet, yesterday. My Dad wont' be back. It's still 5 days away. I strolled to the cake shop. And sat at the booth near the entrance door.

A man, in his 30s, came with a notepad in his hands. "May I have your order, Miss?"

"Can I have a Chocolate Swiss Roll and A cup a Mocha?" I said.

He nodded and went behind the counter. I stared out of the window. A beautiful scenery. Big trees and daisies grown not far away.

The man came back with my order. "There you go, Miss."

I took my time, enjoying the rich chocolate flavour.




It's just six in the afternoon. It's too early to cook dinner. I'm all alone, so, today, I'm going out and act like a babe, and, make myself unrecognizable even by my classmate. Just to relief my loneliness. Kind of weird, huh? I went up to my bedroom and ran through my wardrobe. I settled on a pair of a pleated mini-skirt and a white shirt. I'm looking like Namie Amuro, funny. Damn. I look truly gorgeous with that make-up, like someone you'd die for. That's me, baby.

I stepped out of the house and, of course, locked the door. The air outside was refreshing. The sun had already set. I was walking down the streets and noticed that the people around me, especially [i]man[/i], were drooling over me. I felt good and a little nervous...because I'm not used to this kind of attention! On the other side of the road, a group of guys, maybe around their 20s were whistling at me. Damn1 Now, I regret dressing like this.

I was a little clumsy and stumbled upon a guy. I fell on my butt. Ouch! The guy pulled me up on my feet and muttered his apology.

This is the way I like it! This is me, but not the [i]real[/i] me! Walking thorugh the busy streets, watching and admiring people. Amazing.[/size]

[color=indigo]There'll be Chapter 5, more interesting. Unexpected ^_-

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS STORY.[/color]