Art Dancin' On Your Grave

[Eclectic]

Now that I've caught your attention, I'd like some feedback on this sketch. I tried a different style, at least with the body, and want to know what you think. I already know that the head is disproportioned (thanks to BB for that) and I'm trying to avoid it in future attempts with this style. Anyways, comments appreciated as always.
[url=http://voodoobarbies.250free.com/dance_on_your_grave.png]Dancin' On Your Grave[/url]

[klinanime1]

She looks rather anorexic (sp), and her arms are as long as her legs. Maybe that's what you were going for, but it's things that would annoy me. I like the overall idea, though I wonder how she dances on tombstones with those shoes. ^^

[PiroMunkie]

[size=1]I like the artsyle of the person, but I think everything could have been drawn better. Like klin said, it seems nearly impossible to have her dancing on those tombstones, heh. I thought the stereo was a football, and I have no idea what the other thing is.

Also, you do not need to be on the tombstone to be dancing on a person's grave, heh. A tombstone merely marks where the grave is.

[color=#c0c0c0]"Dancing in the rain of descending ash, dancing on your grave, I'll see you all falling." ^_~[/color][/size]

[Eclectic]

Thanks for your comments. I don't think I'll try usuing this style again. It's a lot easier to just leave it to [url=http://wynterashes.deviantart.com]Ash[/url]. And now that I think about it, it would be very hard to dance on some tombstones... Maybe I could talk a friend into it sometime to see... Oh yes, and the other thing is a wand. That's supposed to be a goth Ginny Weasley. I'm not sure how though. It looks nothing like her. And I'm glad you like the quote, PiroMunkie. I must go now, so until my next attempt.