White Mage Posted January 14, 2004 Share Posted January 14, 2004 [size=1]Much like the Sephiroth banner I made recently. School was delayed for 2 hours today and I had nothing else to really do till 9:00 so I made this. What do you like dislike?[/size] [IMG]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=543334[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bio Posted January 14, 2004 Share Posted January 14, 2004 That's really good. It's an example of how something that's simple can still look great. The only thing that I would suggest, however, is to make the banner a different shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizoku Posted January 15, 2004 Share Posted January 15, 2004 Very nice. I like the picture of cloud facing shrina. The good thing about this, is everything flows together. But, I think the text you choose if out of place here in my opinion. And, are there scan lines on it? If there is it kinda makes the left cloud look blurry. I can't tell that good I dont got my contacts in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanariya Posted January 15, 2004 Share Posted January 15, 2004 [size=1][color=chocolate]Good banner here. The pictures do blend, but the picture on the left annoys me for some reason. I think the font is good, and agreeing with Arch; make the banner a little more interesting. The rectangle look makes it look plain, but maybe experimenting a little bit with different shapes to make the banner and finding a good one would work.[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted January 15, 2004 Share Posted January 15, 2004 This is a great banner. I have no problems with either of the stocks used, nor the layout of the banner. However, two little things I feel I shoiuld recommend to be changed. One- the font for 'Cloud Strife'. I don't like it- there is no disputing that it is a [i]good[/i] font, but maybe it isn't the best style of font possible for this banner. Try something more regimented and straight perhaps? Two- The white glow behind the rightermost stock- it should extend all the way to the edge of the banner, not merely directly behind it. It looks silly with the rest of that other green coming out behind it. Overall, a great banenr though. I like it. Aesthetics: 8/10 Technical: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Mage Posted January 15, 2004 Author Share Posted January 15, 2004 [size=1]Adding text to my banners has been a problem for me lately, I just can't seem to get it right. Thanks for the pointers ^.~ .[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naru Posted January 17, 2004 Share Posted January 17, 2004 I agree with the thing about the text. Other than that, its very good ^^ I wish it was more blue though. Cloud is more of a 'blue' person, not green. It still looks good though! keep up the good work! ~naru-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaiyanPrincessX Posted January 17, 2004 Share Posted January 17, 2004 [SIZE=1]I love the simplicity of this. Although I do have a few pointers. First of all, I think the red Cloud doesn't look right backed up with mostly green. Maybe add a small tint of green to it and fade the white into the background more. The font is another thing. Text should not be placed directly in the middle of an image, it distracts from everything around it. I also suggest it to be resized and a small black border around it aswell. Overall its a good banner, maybe try to fix it up a bit. [/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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