Art Gundam SEED Banner

[Baron Samedi]

INspired by Hittokiri's marvellous recent Gundam banner, I am creating what is one of my firt anime-themed banners. I have, like 5 or 6 different versions of this... but I'll put up my favourite one first, and the one whihc looks best. I don't have an avatar as such yet- however if you would like to use this just say so in this thread, and put a thanks to me in your sig. I'll make an avatar if you want one too.

Anyhow, I'm just looking for crits on this really. So, go for it.

[img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?postid=543473[/img]

[Hittokiri Zero]

I'm not like the model number text you've got going or the text which reads "SEED". The image of Athrun also looks kind of odd because it looks very... "Cartoony" for lack of words while the Aegis Gundam just looks different in terms of style and feel. I'm also not liking those white dots along the right sinde =O. One suggestion to try is that if you replace the image of Athrun or even leave it as it is, try making the right side of the background more blue-ish and the left side more redish. The only reason I suggest this is because blues tend to look better while Athrun and reds tend to look better with the Aegis Gundam so combining the two could be tricky but *may* yeild pretty spiffy results =). Oh and thank you for the compliment XD. If you contact me on AIM I can also give you the url to a large archive of large Gundam SEED scans >_>' i'd rather not post it here mainly because I don't like posting links to the image galleries I use, people tend to abuse the images available and they kind of lose their orginality x___X. On a side note as SaiyanPrincess X predicted ^__^' The Gundam SEED sig saga continues! =)