Writing Not very good

[Dead-Angel]

Well this is an old poem and l dont know if its any good (I'v only writen two or three poems in my life)

Cry

I want to see you cry,
To make you feel the pain and lies,
And in the end to see you die,
For I cannot thought I try,
Bring myself more tears to cry,
I want to see inner fears,
I want to see pearly tears,
On sides of checks caress,
The soft sound of whimpering distress,
My sick sadist laughter you well hear,
For as you cry I feel your fears,
The sadist part of life I know,
Is seeing red crimson dot the snow,
The happiest I feel at night,
Is when your tears betray your plight,
I want to see you cry,
Because I know that when you do,
Finally I will see inside of you,
For every time the tears I cry,
I bare my soul and cannot lie,
For each painted drop that falls,
Shows my weakness as I call,
And now I want you to see,
How sad I am because you be,
And when I cry you stand there still,
And I know my pain you do not feel.


Thanks for reading

Dead-Angel:angel: