Flashlight Posted January 22, 2004 Share Posted January 22, 2004 Here's my latest poem, please tell me what you think (And be brutal, it's the best way for me to improve! :)) ---- All Alone Now Sometimes I scream Just to drown out the pain Sometimes I cry out Into the bleeding rain A cold shiver Runs down my spine I turn around And see you for the very last time I?m all alone now? Nobody at my side? All alone now? Just waiting for the tide? What will it bring That could possibly help me Am I just living A fools dream Nothing is waiting for me I?ve left it all behind All of my memories Are all lost in time I?m all alone My life?s passed me by All alone Just waiting to die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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