Writing Back from the Dead

[Mnemolth]

Well, not quite. But close enough. Someone decided to dare me to post on OB. Dare me?? Well, you should all know better than to dare me. ;)

So here I am... Hmm... *twiddles thumb*... hmm... what to do... what to post... Well, here's something light and frothy and well suited to the OB member's dare, or my return dare anyway. :)

[b]Glance[/b]

That moment, but a moment be
Was more than an eternity.
For then I was lost in her eyes,
My senses melted, mesmerized.
A prisoned heart did soar above
And beat light rhythms of soft love.

To tell her then, I'd not the will,
She knows not that I love her still.

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Now you're on (you know who you are). :D

[Lady Asphyxia]

[size=1]Well, it obviously isn't me daring you. I'd never give you such an easy challenge if I did, heh.

Anyway, it was a light, frothy poem, but it was presented well. It was smooth and flowing, although, the 'be' in the first line doesn't really make sense.

And while the poem was rather short -- especially for you, Mr-Don't-You-Ever-Write-Anything-Longer-Sara/Asphy ;) -- it had a meaning, and a story behind it.

I guess I'm sort of mixed in this poem. I'm not sure whether or not I really like it, heh.[/size]

[roymund]

Woah..... That poem is actually pretty good? Mind if I post it on my website (ADDRESS WITHELD DUE TO POSSIBLE SPAM RULES) if I give you full accreditation?
Just send me a message w/ you name and a copyright date and I'll see to it the world sees it!