Art Animated Naota Banner!

[Shippo]

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woot! Here's my latest banner. I really like it. This piece took me around an hour and a half to complete..heh, well it was well worth it in my opinion. The animation is a little off at times. For example, I think the 6th frame jumps up, and isn't really too smooth. Nothing too big in my eyes though.

Please tell me what you think ^_^

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[Dan Rugh]

It scrolls up way too fast. If you slowed it down [b]a lot[/b], then it could be considered a great banner. Also, some of the original outline on Naota looks like it was taken out when you cropped it.

Good job! :)

[OtakuSennen]

[color=midnightblue]You know, Shippo, that is definitely the best banner you have ever made.

What exactly did you do to the background to give it such a strange, ice-like effect? It turned out brilliantly. The font fits the scene, as does Naota's color scheme. By the way, you made a great choice of image, and made a pretty good cropping job.

Maybe it was how Yoshiyuki Sadamoto originally drew it, but Naota's left sleeve's crop is sort of.. Uneven. Part of it has a thick outline, and then there's barely one at all a few pixels down. I agree with Dan Rugh on the speed of the information to an extent. It's not so fast as it is uneven in its movement. When "Brown" gets about halfway up the banner, it sort of jumps farther in the next frame than the rest of them. Just try and smooth out the movement some and this'll be nearly flawless.

[b]8.9/10[/b] Awesome job, sir Shippo. You have vastly improved.[/color]

[The Mac Attack]

Just as a quick note (as it hasn't been mentioned yet). The animation exceeds Otakuboards requirements for image resolution. If you wish to use it, some form of resizing or cropping may be required.

-The Mac Attack