Art Japan's Artwork

[Japan]

Here are three drawings of my artwork.


This picture I drew is of the Charlie's Angels here at OB. Mei, me, and KittyLynn. Charlie is our very own Administrator here. ^^

[IMG]http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/cuteheeroyuy/cangelslaura.gif[/IMG]

This second image is of Charles and I.

[IMG]http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/cuteheeroyuy/laura1.gif[/IMG]

Lastly, this third picture is Seshomaru from Inuyasha.

[IMG]http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/cuteheeroyuy/sesshoumarulaura.gif[/IMG]

Please tell me what you think. Comments are always welcome.

[RogueA007]

Hehe, I stare at the artwork I already stared at cuz I scanned it.

Anyways....C&C time.

1st picture: Mei is drawn pretty good, got a nice pose going there. On you....eyes don't normally poke out of the face like that on manga style figures. On realistic style figures, sure they can a tad on certain face turns (But the eyes are so small anyways on those poses.). The arms crossed are a bit weird. On Kitty Lynn, the arms and the position of her face. It looks kinda like she's got no neck there. Necks are an extension from the skull, they kinda start from behind the ear.

2nd picture: Good perspective with the box. *Could never get that right until like.....this year in Color and Design.* Limbs are pretty good, the hands are a bit weird looking. *Knows that you're working on them though.* The neck's a bit thin. Just think of how the neck is the only thing holding our 8 pound skulls up. >_>

3rd Picture: You're pretty good at faces. You may want to lower the stuff inside the face (eyes nose, mouth) and the ears just a tad. Or adjust the jawbone a bit lower down, I can't really pinpoint what's making it look a bit off.

I do like them though, don't get me wrong, just giving C&C so you can improve...and....stuff....:lecture: :D

[SasukeUchiha]

These are really fun! I like how you colored them. I especially like the Inyuasha Pic. I think you did a great job capturing him. I hope you post alot more in this thread for me to look at. ^^

[Baron Samedi]

Most of those are pretty good. There are the typical perspective and proportion troubles, and the blond girls 'thumbs up' doesn't look too good. I'm loving the baggy jeans. Boy that Charles is hot, you can see his... uhh. Shock horror, his ball-sack is squeezed between his leg and his jeans. Go on, have a look. See, I'm right, aren't I? XD

Anyway, overall they are quite good drawings. I won't mention the obvious problems, because for anybody who isn't Da Vinci, they're a bugger to draw. The normal, like Elbows, hands and feet could be improved. However, for drawings these are quite good.

How come both Adam and Charlie have Angels, but James doesn't?

Hey.. thats an idea..

Who thinks a James' Angels would be good?

[WW2]

Heh...guess I'll post.

The first two are a bit rough around the edges, but can easily be fixed with a little bit of work.

I have to say my favorite out of the three is the Sesshomaru pic since it has more detail.

All in all they're all good. Keep up the good work.:D