Art Snake Demon Sasuke

[Godelsensei]

Wheee...even though I hate the subject matter, I must say I'm quite proud of this drawing.^^

I hope it is in fact good, and not just my mind playing tricks on me, but I'd like to know what I should fix up before I colour it.

(haha--Sakura, Sasuke, I was thinking of you guys as I drew this)


-Godel

[Kanariya]

[size=1][color=chocolate]This is very good, makes me jealous. What I like best about this is the snake; it looks realitic in the drawing, but at the same time as a shadow. Plus, it's head and all is very well drawn. Nice job.

Moving onto the boy. He is good, but his hands need work. Only advice is to practice on that. Also, I don't know why, but I don't like the feet position. But the rest is very good.[/size][/color]

[haruno_sakura]

I didn't get to see this until now, Godel, but I like the concept that you've come up with. It looks rather freaky, like a ghost snake wanting to devour Sasuke as much as I would like to..er. Anyway, Wasabi has already pointed what I wanted to say, except I have another thing to add. There are some problems with proportion in this picture. The hand that's suspended up in the air (his right arm) is long and seems to fit with the rest of his body, while the one that's hanging down on the bottom (his left arm) seems a little too short. Now, if you mentally juxtapose the two arms on top of each other, you'll see that they're not the same length, so it seems like he's got a bad left arm. Other than that, it's an excellent drawing ^^

~haruno_sakura