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TheShinje
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[size=1] [color=3366CC]Otakuboards is NOT the forum in the center of this piece, read the last line of the last stanza and it becomes apparent. Hehe.

[b] Modrod [/b]


A deleted post shatters the air,
Power corrupting begins right here,
Your views, not mine, your views aren't mine,
It's a damn shame it has come to this time.

Quite comfortable with your hole in the sand.
Quite comfortable when you have the power to ban.
Quite comfortable when differing views do get banned.
Screw the lot of you, I do not like sand.

Intelligent discussion cannot thrive here.
Powerful rebuttals get trashed here.
Can they give back, a few words or two?
No they can't they know what i speak is the Truth.

Instead the use their power to delete.
And soon my time, to feel the wrath of their ban.
I'd like to know that they Ring true to their Source,
But thank God, thank God, for Otakuboards.

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A bit of symbolism is in there for you to decipher. [/size][/color]
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[size=1] [color=3366CC] Heh, nice guess there PT, this time it's not Anime Enema, but it sure is close.

I'm talking about a board in particular, that has deleted a very good rebuttal of mine concerning the way they run things.

Well, if you want a spoiler, head on over to MyO, because before this poem, I did a write up on what I posted there, the name is blatantly in the title ;)

*will post a picture of "the event" should it happen*[/size][/color]
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[size=1]Oooh, well done. I don't know which boards you're referring to, but from a literary aspect, I like it.

I like the reference to ignorance; "hole in the sand", and I like the fact that it rhymes. Not many pieces rhyme anymore, but I absolutely love it when I come across poems that do.

The poem has a beat behind it -- sort of rap-ish, even, which is cool.

*nods* All around a good poem.[/size]
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