Art Notebook Girls

[Queen Asuka]

[color=hotpink][size=1]Alright well, here's three new pictures that I just scanned up and upload to theOtaku's fanart site and I just wanted to get your feedback on them since they have relatively low ratings. I think they are pretty good pictures, and they are original. I'm just so tired of going into there and seeing everyone copying exact pictures that you can find on the net and calling it something big. Anywho, the pictures:

[img]http://www.angelfire.com/punk3/otakupictures/ga.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.angelfire.com/punk3/otakupictures/ae.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.angelfire.com/punk3/otakupictures/pf.jpg[/img]

Mkay. Please tell me. NOW.[/color][/size]

[Mimmsicle]

[COLOR=darkred]I have absolutely nothing to say about the first one, simply because I think you did splendidly on it. Proportions, texture etc.
It looks very much like an actual photograph... of [b]you[/b] come to think of it ^_^

[b]The second one:[/b] Really lovely Aeris drawing [size=1](I know some people spell it Aerith, or something, but I'm sticking to my spelling ;] )[/size]
Again you've kept your original style and that gave it that extra bit of [b]oomph.[/b]

The only thing I'd like to comment on is her hair, where the pony tail takes off from the rest of her head.... ehm, yeah. It could be more defined, because as of now it's difficult to see where it starts and not. That's my only iffy comment.

[b]The last one:[/b] At first I had a proportion issue with it, but now when I look at it... I see that it suits the character. Gives it more of a ... naughty (?) edge ~_^
Very good drawn, I love the butterfly-esque wings and tatooed-like "clothing".

[b]You're doing great, my Queen !! [i]*bows*[/i][/b]

- Mimmi[/COLOR]

[Maully]

[color=green]I really like the first one. I think she has a realism to her. She is well proportioned and I like her outfit. It seems strange to me to say a girl with wings has a realism... She's my favorite of the three.

The second one is well drawn, and I like the crease lines in her clothes (you have a good eye for detail). I like the jacket too, it's a nice little accessory.

I really like the third one too. It's fun. I love the style you've drawn her in, and her cute little wings to counter her "naughty" outfit. I also love her shoes...

All-in-all, Fine work![/color]

[Kanariya]

[size=1][color=chocolate]The first one is my favorite out of the three; I like it how you have an original outift and have the wings as a mix. Creative. Also, the wings remind me of chibiness. O.o

The second one is good too. What I like most is the little jacket you added with the outfit, it looks great.

The third one is out of proportion, but like Mimmi said, looking at it more you realize it suits the character with it's naughty look.[/size][/color]

[EternallyYoung]

I think 1 is great!
I think 2 is good but there is something wrong that I just cant catch...
I think 3 is ok but for such a slutzy character she should have a longer belly, her chin is a little off center andher hand is just a bit too big.

i think your art is great! i love all of it! ive seen al of it i like it that much!

[Queen Asuka]

[color=hotpink][size=1]I don't understand how the third chic is disproportionate. Can someone tell me exactly what it is?[/color][/size]

[future girl]

The first one really is very well done. The proportions, outfit, wings, everything meshes very well together.

The second one is equally good, although I think if you penned in the outline it would catch the eye more.

The third one isn't disproportionate, I think. There's an oddness about her right hip though, but it's still very nicely done and the naughty outfit is nice indeed.

[Mimmsicle]

[COLOR=darkred]I think it's because, compared to the other two, the face is slightly compressed. Or at least it comes off as such to my untrained eyes.

And you've placed the chin on the outside of the neck, unlike with the first two.

Don't know if I make much sense now ^_^;

But like I stated in the first post I made, it only looks "off" on a quick glance. When you actually look at it, then it's fine.

- Mimmi ^_^[/COLOR]

[Dagger]

Your picture of Aerith is [i]so[/i] beautiful; though it bears all the hallmarks of your unique artistic style, she's still instantly recognizable. I just love the expression on her face. She comes across as being very sweet, happy and optimistic--all qualities which made me adore the original character. So I'd say that you did an excellent job of capturing this lovely lady's personality, not to mention her beauty. ^_^

That particular hairstyle can be difficult to draw, but I really like your take on it.

~Dagger~

[eleanor]

[color=firebrick][i]I don't understand how the third chic is disproportionate. Can someone tell me exactly what it is?[/i]

Personally, I think the drawings are [i]proportionally[/i] almost perfect. I just believe you have a tiny problem with the limbs. No biggie, though. I like the Aerith drawing the most, though, it's really very pretty. XD I'm sort of jealous right now because you can draw peoples' faces straightly when they're looking directly at you. I always have to make their heads turned to the side slightly to get it right. >_>.[/color]

[Queen Asuka]

[color=hotpink][size=1]Thanks for the comments, guys.

I really like the Aerith drawing a lot myself. I sketched it in my first day of Philosophy, the most boring class in existance. I colored some of it with my pink highlighter and some with a pink pen, but the pen didn't show up. I really wish that it wasn't on notebook paper, but I am happy with it.

About the third one, her face may look "smaller" because I meant for it to be that way. She's supposed to be sort of exotic and naughty, like a lot of people have said.[/color][/size]

[Megumi]

I like the first, the second is alright, the third one I HATE her faceline. The fact that they are on notebook paper makes them less attractive.