Art Like it?

[EternallyYoung]

Can some one please tell me what is wrong with her? Ive gotten a lot of crappy reviews from ppl.

[color=teal]EDIT:[/color] i dont get it ! three ppl have looked....no1 has replied!

[color=teal]Please do not double post. Use the Edit button at the bottom of your post if you want to say something, and otherwise, be patient for replies. ;) -Syk3[/color]

[Bullet Theory]

there are a few smudges, the right foot looks backwards, but other than that its good

[Baron Samedi]

A few things.

One: Double posting is bad. Very bad.

Two: People will reply if they want to. They don't have to. Complaining about it makes us less likely to respond.

Three: The drawing is OK. It is nothing great. The hair especially looks bad, too square and blockish. It just lacks life, it looks like cardboard. The drawing is decent enough, but it lacks the vigour that a piece needs. I am no artist, but I know what I like and what a piece should be like.

I can't help you. I am just giving my opinion.

Keep trying though.

[Godelsensei]

Hmmm...the lines are kind of detatched--she looks like alot of her joints have been dislocated. Her feet are kind of small, and undefined, and the facial proportions are rather off. I know that large eyes can count as a shoujo style of drawing, but they don't look right here.

Try making her hair less of a solid, and more a bunch of wisps--like real hair. If you're going for a picture of an Elf floating in the wind, avoid kiddie-ish drawing styles. It takes away from the feel of the picture.

[Syk3]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by EternallyYoung [/i]
[B]thank you 4 all suggestions [/B][/QUOTE]
[color=30415d]It would be very much appreciated if you improved upon your grammar and spelling. ^_^ It doesn't take that much more time to write out the word, and it's easier to understand you.[/color]