Art Roseate Discord v2

[Kinetic]

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Very rarely do I use stocks, but I was emotionally drawn to this piece and decided that it needed a little something extra. It took a [i]very[/i] long time to edit the stock. It was originally black and a blue-ish green or something. Like I said, quite a bit of airbrushing and editing (the lips still bother me). The text in the center is from an AFI song that I thought fit, especially since the girl in the stock is crying. Hope you enjoy :)

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[SaiyanPrincessX]

This is an interesting piece. I'm not much for pink but it fits this quite well. The flower on the bottom left ties in nicely aswell. The girl looks a bit strange though; shes out of proportion. I don't care for the font that reads 'Roseate Discord'. Aside from those few quirks its great.

[Haze]

hmmm....I would have to say that I like v1 better. The girl is indeed a bit out of proportion. She is a bit odd looking too. I'm not sure she really fits in either. Also the text you added does not fit. It just looks a bit cluttered with both "Three tears I've saved for you" and "Roseate Discord" in there. The "three tears..." portion's font doesn't really flow with the rest. Perhaps if you faded it or changed the pink border to something darker. Not alot more dark, just a touch darker. Also the text "roseate discord" no longer flows with everything. It goes right over her face, which doesn't look too good.

But once again great job. The actuall editing you did to that face looks awesome. Also the background and such still looks good, as I have said before. I just don't particurly care for this one as much. But I can't say that you didn't do great on it.