Writing Sheara's adventure part 5

[riku01]

Sheara woke up she put her hands on her hear and got out of bed and befor she knew it she tripped "Ahhhhh dammit!!!!!" she said "Ashley what the hel-?" but befor she could say anything she took a look around the room the wall were painted blue and black it was very neat and the was a window at the foot of the bed. she stood up to see what she tripped over, she gasp and sat on the bed it was a long sorwd with a dragon carved on it looked just like Jakes from in her dreams "This must be a dream then.....I guess I'll just go back to sleep". Sheara fell a sleep
Then two boys came in and one girl "Wow how long has she been asleep?" said the girl "About three days now non-stop i guess ." said a tall boy . Shear rolled on her back but was still asleep. "Is she Shinjookoo?" "No i cant tell ill just wait till she wakes up then we will see."

Sheara found her self in the forest behinde a tree there were to children talking they looked very young "Why do you were that stupid briad " said the little girl "because its a sighn of the Shinjookoo clan." Sheara eyes widen she already had this dream and that little girl she reminded Sheara of herself she didn't know why the little girl fell to the ground she was crying the liitle boy had walked off Sheara just couldn't stand there she fround and walk to the little girl stood her up and smiled "hi there why are you crying......aw come on let me see your face" the little girl turned her face and look up the little girls jaw droopedshe sreamed Shear turned around there was a huged bug "Ah!" Sheara picked up the little girl and ran for her life but soon she was cornerd the bug flew down it was huge taller than sheara its might have been about 8'5she crouched down put the small girl behind her they hugged tight until a grown man jumped on the the bugs back and began to stab it the bug screamed and fell to the ground she open her eyes it was Jake she stood up "Are you hurt Sheara?" "No Jake" said the little girl she ran right though Sheara and huged Jake, Sheara......the older one stood up slowly as she touched her arm her hand went right though "Hey?!" the older sheara stood there "Sheara welcome home your mom told me you were on your way " Jake smiled at the little girl and rubed her hair down the young boy came running back with a first aid kit "is she hurt...are you hurt master?" "Everyones ok but next time Tidus dont leave her ok?" Tidus took of his hat he had silver goldish hair " I have a present for you sheara" Jake said "its a necklace it was your moms i gave it to her a long time ago the color changes with how your feeling as long as your happy it will be your favorite color ok" "But weres my mommy were Shear my mommy were is she?" the little girl said Jake looked down and picked her up I'll telll you when we get there he began walk and sheara felt herself waking up.

[DeadSeraphim]

Grammar. I'm sure its a good story but reading it was so flipping difficult because it hasn't even got the bare minimum when it comes to grrammatical requirements. You have some full stops, granted, but its incredibly hard to read otherwise. Mayhap you could run it through word and let spell checker fix it for you then post it again.