Writing Nate does poems!?

[Nate]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=red]Yep, that's right. We were doing an assignment in English here we write a similie/metaphor poem describing us. As I was reading a friend's poem, this idea struck me, so I wrote it down. Here it is:[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am love, without me there is no life[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I heal sadness, no death can stop me[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with joy to make the world go around[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am love, I am in everyone[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am hate, I control the Earth[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I make sadness, and cause death[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with death to control everything[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am hate, I am in many[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am joy, I make the flowers bloom[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am in birds and puppy dogs[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with love to keep people alive[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am joy, I help people[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am death, I control the afterlife[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I make the ultimate sadness, I am a void[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with hate to control all[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am death, I effect everyone[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am music, I am everyone[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]Whether it's a bell or the beautiful harp[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with everyone to change the world[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am music, I stand alone[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am a heart, I contain all of the above[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I look weak, but I am strong with friends[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I work with other people to make the world[/color][/font]
[font=Comic Sans MS][color=purple]I am a heart, I am strong[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=red]So..what do you think? If you like them, I can make more. Let me know, please.[/color][/font]

[font=Comic Sans MS][color=red]_-Nate-_[/color][/font]

[Burori]

Pretty good there nate. It had a very good flow but a few sentences or two could be worked on. Overall I would say it shows you put some time into it so blah.

I'd give it a 8/10 overall. Keep it up and you'll be a pro.