Art Kaisuke vs Kinetic -- Round Two

[Kinetic]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=slategray]I'm just in the mood for graphics lately I guess. A sort of new style, working more on fonts and such in a small space, making it more of a compositional style. Anyway, rules: (if you accept)[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Win: 8 votes[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]KO: 5 votes[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]No stock images[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Any Size[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Any Program[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Any anthing else[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Post ASAP ;)[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090][img]http://chriscole.250free.com/spasverve.png[/img][/color][/size][/font]

[Syn]

ooo, cool cool.

i'll post my entry later, sorry if this is late but i've only just seen the topic. ^_^;;

EDIT: Ok, heres my piece attached. Good luck ^_^

[Psychotik]

Very good piece's from the both of you, good job!

@Kinetic

Nice piece, I ecspecially like the background, not to sure about the small text though, even though its to small to read you still tell its just been randomly typed, it would probably look better if you used actual text you've written instead of just random words. Small text also usually looks better if its bunched to gether rather than spaced apart ( I mean such as it seems you have 1.5 line spacing on or something.)

@Kaisuke

I like the goldenny thingy in the top left corner, its a well thought out piece a little plain for me though.

(I'll vote later after other people have)

[Mimmsicle]

[size=1][color=#800000]I really liked both... so it was a touch decision =\[/color][/size]

[size=1][color=#800000][b]Kinetic's[/b] was really fun and vibrant - I loved the use of colors, and text blocks. [/color][/size]

[size=1][color=#800000]For some reason it feels like you've got too much going on in it. At first I thought it was "euphoria" and "spasmooic nerve" that overdid it, but the more I look at it... the less certain I get. [/color][/size]
[size=1][color=#800000]Sorry that I can't be more specific than that ^_^;[/color][/size]

[size=1][color=#800000][b]Kenji's[/b] was clean-cut and muted. Soothing on the eyes. [/color][/size]

[size=1][color=#800000]It looks like there is a text line in the middle of the image, but I can't make out if it's supposed to say anything. I'm kind of not liking that >_>;[/color][/size]


[size=1][color=#800000]It was really close, but Kenji got my vote this time ^_^;[/color][/size]

[size=1][color=#800000]- Mimmi[/color][/size]

[Kinetic]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=slategray]Every time I think I have something that I can beat Kenji with, he obliterates me ^_^' Two more votes to go anyway, I still have a chance. lol[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Verdana][size=2][color=#708090]Thanks to everyone who commented. And Mimmi, it's Spasmodic ;) Just another word for erratic.[/color][/size][/font]

[Boo]

[color=gray][b]Kinetix[/b]
Yeah I also have complaints about the little text, but I wont bother you with reading it cause its basically all been said.
Also the black linish thingies going through it are really taking the attention. I didnt even know there was whitish in it untill I looked closer, I thought it was all darkish lol.

[B]Kenjah[/b]
Well, your work is really nice and like said, clean and good for the eye.

Yet, you could try something else for once lol. You sort of making these graphics the whole time.
So this graphic doesnt really catch my thoughts like Kinetix' did.

[i]Kinetic got my point[/i][/color]