BabyGirl Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 [color=deeppink]Okey, I need a few good critiques on this here sketch (rough sketch, mind you) because if I like it enough, it will become a finalized charcoal drawing. The reason it is really really important for me to know of any improvements I could make is because it basically decides my fate of being accepted to this small art college. You see, I plan on majoring in journalism in college (which will be next year) but I found this really awesome art college at which I could major in fine art photography. The only problem with this is I would be put in drawing and painting classes with people who have been drawing for years. And I just [i]started[/i]... The admissions counselor that I met with told me that my photography was good enough. Now all she needs for me to do is submit three simple, charcoal drawings. I'm sorta nervous about it...since she's an advanced artist and she'll be reviewing all of it...:worried: <---hehe, me. SO ANYWAY, I always end up posting messages that are way too long, so I will end this. Okey, so feedback would be greatly appreciated! Should I make this into a final product or not?[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lia Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 heh well i'm a visual major at the school of the arts ^^ u just started? well ur doing good! :D just one tip i have is that u need to add more form and volume into ur sketch by ading ore curved lines to make it look like the shoe isn't just 2d on paper and just a little more intensity on ur value but other than that, great start :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treble Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 Heh its seems nice to me,but in my opinion i say it needs more touch in sketches,other than that it looks nice the way it is.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transtic Nerve Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by ssj chic [/i] [B]heh well i'm a visual major at the school of the arts ^^ u just started? well ur doing good! :D just one tip i have is that u need to add more form and volume into ur sketch by ading ore curved lines to make it look like the shoe isn't just 2d on paper and just a little more intensity on ur value but other than that, great start :D [/B][/QUOTE] I totally agree with that. By adding a curve line or curved lines you give the show a round look and thus gives it more of a 3-D look.... also blend your lines in... don't leave it so you can see lines (unless that was what you wanted to do) but charcoal blends easily, so just rub it in and smear it so you get a smooth gradual change of value from the dark to light, Instead of lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Macaiodh Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 here's my advice...make the ribbons more prominent in the picture. they're the best part of ballet slippers. make them all twisting & curling, or resting over the slippers, whatever. you can do so many cool things w/ ribbons & it will make it look more 3-D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Voodookanaka Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 im the same way this year, im in a class of GCE qualified students and a texan architect, i just turned up on enrolemet day and drew the guy a picture, as for the drawin', I dont know anything about ballet so I really cant help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 You should...Umm DO WHAT THEY SAID! LoL -.- :drunk: :drunk: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Posted October 24, 2001 Share Posted October 24, 2001 Yeah what Forte said LoL!:mrt: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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