Art Line Art

[~*Lilith*~]

[font=bookantique][i]Here is some of my Line Art to share with you... All orginal characters.

[url=http://www.deviantart.com/view/5148783/]Mermaind[/url]

[url=http://www.deviantart.com/view/5152856/]Elf Girl[/url]

[url=http://www.deviantart.com/view/6172737/]Boy in a tree (For Mature Viewing Only)[/url]

Comments welcome... Thank you![/i][/font]

[Epsilon]

[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]Another Devi. member I see.

Anyways...In my opinion, you need a bit more work on bodies. Also on thickness of lines when it comes to hair. For the last one, and the elfin, there should be a bit more on angles. Some more detail on the boy in the tree would be nice, it's a bit plain on the body parts. Considering the way he's sitting there'd be more powerment in musle tissues and contrast ways of skin.

Other then that very nice, I like the way you ink. Your strokes are nice, clean, and full. I like the expressions they have though, and your way of which their eyes look are good. I think it'd be a good idea to clean them up a bit, and try your hand at cging the line art. They're also good character designs.

My favorite is the mermaid. I like the shadowing, but thickness of her hair is what I had been talking about specifically. But I like the way her hair is long, and flows accordingly to her body. Her lower half, and the clear/transparent flap around her waist leading to the moon on her lower torso is a really cool idea. Spiffy, the job was with the two moons and the wings.
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[~*Lilith*~]

Thanks I know they need a lot of work. ^^ I just kind of playing around with ideas. I might end up coloring the boy one soon. Not sure when but soon so I gave him less detial for that reason.

Thank you!

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