pariettilion Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 So, I've had this idea for a manga that I want to do for a while now, tell me what u think Kajua is your regular girl, until one day she is sent to a special school after fighting in school. The Rosa bates school for the youth, or more commonly known as Fahrenheit high is where she is sent. Fahrenheit is a place for kids with behavior problem, but also have achieved some kind of academic history (so u have to be smart too) She meets this girl named Kirii on the train there and they kinda become friends. Kirii is also going to the same school as she is. (Kirii is the meek and not loud type, so Kajua can't simply figure out why she would be going there too) Things are fine when she gets there, she meet a strange teacher who tells her of his theory of the world, that every action, and even thought has already existed, (In the general way.) she shrugs it off, then goes to lunch and meets Aries-a dark haired boy who seems kind of solemn on his own. Later, she finds out that Aries had multiple personalty syndrome, his other side is sly, a good fighter and also a bit of a trouble maker. Aries, Kajua and Kirii end up all becoming like friends, but of coarse they have enemies. Their enemies are an Asian gang. In some way, they rules the school. We later find out that the leader is someone that Kajua kinda knew from the past. Kirii starts having dreams (really in the beginning though) because she is a good artist, she draws the people in her dreams. Mainly is it 2 different woman, we learn that their names are Maria and sukie, kirii's dreams about them are different, but in a strange way the same. Kajua has the feeling that she has seen these 2 before, sukie supposedly is from old Japan, in all the dreams Kirii has about her, she is fighting some strange looking thing/person. Maria is from The Roman times of Italy, she seems to be some kind of a witch. It's a really long plot and confusing story but chase ahead and Kajua finds out that she is the reincarnation of these 2 woman, sukie was actually a demon and the greatest fighter of all time, Maria was the daughter of a noble and a witch. Whenever Kajua gets really mad or sad, the aspects of these 2 woman kind of 'show up' we also find out that Kirii, most of the gang members and even Kajua's strange teacher were real people from the past that sukie and Maria were in contact with. In Maria's time, Aries were twin brothers that both were fighting love wise over Kajua. In Sukie's, They were distant war lords. Her teacher's ideal about the past is actually true, every action and though have already been played out, and supposedly...Kajua and her friends will lead the life that sukie and Maria both lead. Also there's a small side story involving the school itself, (why its named after this 'Rosa bates person') Yes, I know all Very strange. I haven't even got into the character structure yet. But, please tell me what u think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Necessaryevil Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 I think it sounds awsome. Its like a story that happen'd in there previous life then after many years is being found out again and re acted. sounds like you put a lot of thought into it. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naruto_362 Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 what can i say but: cool. I have my own manga series 2. check it out. It's the "My own manga" post. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klinanime1 Posted May 3, 2004 Share Posted May 3, 2004 Uh... I'm really confused and I think it has something to do with grammar and the rare occasion of me thinking to much. It sounds good, though, and the whole reincarnation-thing is very popular now. Heh, most mahou-shojo mangas are. It could go somewhere. Definately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pariettilion Posted May 4, 2004 Author Share Posted May 4, 2004 ...so, does it sound orginal? I've noticed that the problem with a lot of manga ideas around here is that they aren't very orginal. By the way, I edited a bit, grammar wise I mean. Some of the sentaces didn't make scence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guns_n_candy Posted May 4, 2004 Share Posted May 4, 2004 sounds good, nice origonal story too. it sounds like something that someone could get hooked on after reading about 3 pages (at least, someone like me) good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 5, 2004 Share Posted May 5, 2004 Intricate plot line...sounds good, so long as its got some nice battle scenes :devil: . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mace_lightning Posted May 7, 2004 Share Posted May 7, 2004 [FONT=Times New Roman]times new roman[/FONT] Hi there! I like it, needs a bit more work but it sounds like a preaty cool story, one question tho whats the theme of your story? :babble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei Posted May 7, 2004 Share Posted May 7, 2004 [color=darkblue]mace_lightning and SilverCyclone, I want you two to watch your posting in the future. The posts made by the both of you qualify as spam, so you may want to edit them with what you like about the storyline and why.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pariettilion Posted May 7, 2004 Author Share Posted May 7, 2004 not sure on the theme.... But, I did 2 VERY rough character drawings (aries and the leader of the gang) [img]http://ee.1asphost.com/parietti/Image13.jpg[/img] [img]http://ee.1asphost.com/parietti/Image12.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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