Manga My own manga!!!:)

[Naruto_362]

I have my own manga series called Kicker. It's still not finished but heres the gist of it. A 14 year old 1/2 fox demon and a mysterious cat girl fight against an evil being. He plants dark seeds in peopls hearts and they grow into powerful shadow beasts that erupt out of the victims body. The boy, whos name is Taken, and the ultra-smart clutz cat girl, called Erin, fight these beast so that they can destroy "The Dark One". So what do you guys think?

[SoapyShoes]

Not to be a jerk, but that sounds rediculously cliché and like Inuyasha. You've got a young demon, a klutzy girl, seeds that make people insane (kinda like the shards in Inuyasha), and the boy has ears. But it might make money since it is cliché.

[demonjersey]

yea it does sound like the same old same old to me. No offense.

Jersey

[klinanime1]

Hate to say it, but it sounds like a more violent Sailor Moon to me. But hey, it's all in how you present the manga. It could very well go somewhere depending on if it is attractive to the reader or not. Rely on your own creativity and not the situations in other mangas and it might work. It is in danger of being unoriginal, so watch out.

[Nehszriah]

That manga story sounds... ummm... intresting, I guess. I have started a chibi manga of my own called Demonic Prophecy. Two best teenage friends who are the reincarnations of two powerful and ancient demons. Kamikaze (the girl) is smart, cool-headed and witty, while Nero (the boy) is a screw-up, rash and I orphan him early in the plot line, so he gets to live with Kaze's family (instead of really old and odd relaitives). Good luck on yours. How is mine? ~*^___^*~