Guest rjokay Posted May 7, 2004 Share Posted May 7, 2004 hi, I just found this place, what a feature rich forum, really cool. (kakko iii!) I'm gonna post my little story now, if anyone wants to draw it for me, I'd really appreciate it (we will make millions of dollars! :laugh: ) Aura's Sphere: endless water being hovering midair over endless water posed in relaxed indian style legs slightly drooped, a sphere of beings aura encompasses it completely, this inner aura has peace and tranquility within the core of the beings training the sphere slowly moves larger and smaller by centimeters of the entire circumfrence, but a steady overhead angle envisions the particles of air, and water molecules being torn to shreds at the end of of the beings control outside of the beings control: variable lashes of energy whip in multiple streams throught the entirety of the area encompassing the beings aura the wind is extremely high for miles in diamter of aura's xy, the wind being greatest near the sphere of the beings control, but in addition to high winds, the waters lash with the energy whips that very in length, and are not seen, but only felt from the vision of the eye by the streams of water, and high gusts of air gaining in intensity to the aura's sphere. time passes, camerastillslow; over head shot's, revolving side angles from 15m, an natural island 24kilometers away still of small natural beach on island shore; audio intensity; rumbling as we view the shore; large wave of streams of water_first, one large row of consecutive drips on a close up of the sand> droplets hit beach making mud droplets, then moments later, another, and another, waves of strange lines of droplets marking the beachshore in no particular pattern> scene:less than 4sec for droplet effect> camera;back to main aura beginning with: momentary slowdown overhead a rough monotone appearance black hair, black eyes, dynamic body features > camera moves quickly from slowdownoverhead to 15m revolving, ~review: current situation; beings aura still stable 15 seconds into first cut~,back to beach muddropletcam: clipping in the audio begins the energy steps to the next level of intensity, the lines of mud droplets on the beach become oblivous we hear loud audio clipping and a new higher intensity violently tearing up the sorrounding environment of the aura'ssphere; camera vibrates slightly intensifying environmental threshold on elements, ~20sec's~, the break in the form begins as follows: camera races back to overheadslowframe view of being~1sec~; a "slice an intracate system of intrinsic energies suddenly torn as a single joint within aura'ssphere falters, it is viewed as a blurry outline of the slice that is highlited by its transparent disposition within the aurassphere, only viewed for a few fractions of a second as the system falls apart> the intensity booms rapidly and violently into an uncontrollable state, and aura's sphere diminishes within a few hundred more milliseconds the body of the being is torn for only moments :::::::uncomplete::::::: anyone see what I see?, I see a lot more too, I'd love to talk about it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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