Amity Posted May 8, 2004 Share Posted May 8, 2004 Tempt Liar your will You find it in me I liar that's it That's what I see Your tricks and games Are always the same You Tempt me with Hate Which implies to my Fate Always you're screaming Putting me down Hitting me always Beating to the ground A shredded tear comes down the face Always you screaming To know my place You're not there anymore You're just dirt on my shoe I don't know how you knew Leaving this love This lie above You Tempt me with Hate Which implies to my Fate.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sahkiryce Posted May 9, 2004 Share Posted May 9, 2004 [FONT=Book Antiqua][color=purple]Truly . . . I could sense your emotion in this poem . . . all in all . . . it's very nice ^_^ I really like it because it's expressive. . . just the way a poem SHOULD be ^_^ Good work ^_^[/color][/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amity Posted May 9, 2004 Author Share Posted May 9, 2004 Oh, thank you. I wasn't really expecting anyone to respond. Generally because I usually wouldn't want them to, I would just want them to look at it and see if they can solve my feelings ^_^. But thank you for your kind words. I do put in al lot of my feelings. I don't bother writing them down, I just think up something and type it up, then post it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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