SilverCyclone Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 New manga idea. Whatcha think? Yuki is your normal girl. She has a job at the library, she has an apartment, and she has many friends. A normal life. Until she stumbles upon a book. An old book written in runes. When she accidentaly summons a demonic minion, all hell breaks loose. Literally. Now she and her minion Avenite must hunt down the other demons before the portal closes. And the demons stay with her forever. Avenite is a shapeshifting demon minion, a servant to Yuki. I got the title because demons tend to have very tedious amounts of loyalty. Any feedback is more then welcome, and once my scanner is fixed (falling off a counter tends to put it out of commission :bawl: ) I'll get some artwork on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guns_n_candy Posted May 13, 2004 Share Posted May 13, 2004 that sounds pretty cool... the story sounds somewhat familiar, there's probably another book like that or something, but the way you put it it sounds really cool. how do the demons stay with her forever? like if they dont get through the portal, they have to stay with her, or they do anyway even if she gets them all? also, is there a reason she can read the book, or is she picked specially to read it or something? (by the way, no apostrophe on ties) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 13, 2004 Author Share Posted May 13, 2004 guns_n_candy: Yes, she is specially picked to read the book, but the reason why is unclear until later in the series. And the demons either need a master to draw energy from (known as "Eder" in the book) or return to their world. Unfortunately, the more demons the master has, the more energy is needed, and if the master isnt strong enough, he/she will die. As a result of being summoned without a master, they will either die from lack of Eder, or feed off the humans, the latter being the preferable choice. Yuki is what's known as an Overlord, a person who rules over demon minions. And yes, there is a difference between minions and demons. Thanks for the apostrophe thing to, I am way to easily confused with big words like "tie" or "the". Thanks for the feedback. I probably shouldve been a bit clearer on those items. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guns_n_candy Posted May 15, 2004 Share Posted May 15, 2004 thats okay...its good that you thought this stuff over at least, instead of not knowing, like some people do. (i do it too, so i cant talk...) that sounds like it could come out to be a great story. keep going, dont give up! (again, i cant talk here...) id like to see it if you ever get it on your computer ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 17, 2004 Author Share Posted May 17, 2004 Sh** :angry2: ...My scanner wont be fixed until summer. However, I am making a deal with a friend of mine. Art should be ready by...Thursday at most. While the scanner is an inconvenience, my friend should let me use his :help: . I've finished concept art for Avenite :demon: , and another character whom I will not devulge. And I need opinions on character ideas for Yuki. Should she be clumsy good natured, or kind of dark, emotionless? Im leaning for the latter. But I would welcome any opinions of any kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Guardian Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Well you did mention that Yuki had many friends..umm why not make her a cheerful,likeable and good natured but on the other hand she had a dark personality deep inside her which Avenite finds it to be quite interesting. :p well its just an idea. Or you might want to make her a bit clumsy and absent minded..to add a bit of comical relief :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 18, 2004 Author Share Posted May 18, 2004 Heh, forgot about the friends thing! Ive been so busy on other characters. Good idea though, really worth considering. One of her friends has the clumsy, absent minded part already. Plus alot of comedy will come from Avenite when he finds the miracles of alchoholic cider. Minions apparently have no resistance whatsoever. The scanner problem is fixed. I have artwork ready by tomorrow. Glad I finally came up with an idea that is original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 20, 2004 Author Share Posted May 20, 2004 AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!! My friend is at the hospital! Sorry, but I cant post artwork today. Damn! Im gonna try tomorrow, but if I cant, then I'll see if I can find one at school. %#@(%(#$@)^&$@#!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted May 26, 2004 Author Share Posted May 26, 2004 Alright folks. I know I have been putting it off for waaaay to long. But I finally got around to scanning em in. They're not that great, just pencil sketches, but they'll do for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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