Manga Manga idea ...

[Guest Zaffa Dot Xom]

This is the story of EX.

Lone high school freshman Shigemitsu Buru-su-kun wants to be noticed; but not the way he is as of now. Preppies, jocks, and weirdos just adore the thought of messing the poor kid up and watching an unexpected action to come up. But when he comes home after a fight, he discovered a [I]nearly[/I] impossible talent one could think was completely immature ... he's found that he can bring various pictures, at the palms of his hands, to real black and white life.

He toys with the possibility, summoning huge three-headed dragons and ogres at will, and dueling them using a unique miniature blue bazooka with the power level a concentrated particle beam holds. During these "battles", he accidentally destroys nearby property; including the school!

But, one day whence he decided to summon up a completely identical copy of himself ... total chaos consumes, as the alter-ego becomes completely desperate to control the world under his own paper creations. It's a fight for Buru-su-kun's life, as each creation draws a spell to the ultimate, manical creation! Can he stop the production of this monster before Alter Buru-su has a chance to finish it ... ?

[kemushi]

:tasty: First of all: Creative idea~! Have you already begone the preliminaries or begin on this project?

I just wanted to give some insight on what might help the story.
You said Buru-su-kun? ^_^; In japanese "-su" is not a suffix, so you do not add it at the end of the name. If its part of the name, it would be "Burusu-kun" ^.^ keekee.
Thought u might want to know.

Also, You said that this power comes from the palms of his hand? Perhaps rather than that, he summons them through some instrument, like perhaps if he writes/draws the image in an ancient book the runes come to life and form the spell-beasts; or perhaps after chanting an incantation his figments come to life?

You may not want to steer into direct *appear-from-nothing* relationships, because they become compliated in the explanation, which only futhers the issues of plot ^_^;. Though, if you keep with this idea, you may want to give a big history check as to how this power came to him and how it works.

~Ke-chan

[Guest Zaffa Dot Xom]

[QUOTE=kemushi]:tasty: First of all: Creative idea~! Have you already begone the preliminaries or begin on this project?

I just wanted to give some insight on what might help the story.
You said Buru-su-kun? ^_^; In japanese "-su" is not a suffix, so you do not add it at the end of the name. If its part of the name, it would be "Burusu-kun" ^.^ keekee.
Thought u might want to know.

Also, You said that this power comes from the palms of his hand? Perhaps rather than that, he summons them through some instrument, like perhaps if he writes/draws the image in an ancient book the runes come to life and form the spell-beasts; or perhaps after chanting an incantation his figments come to life?

You may not want to steer into direct *appear-from-nothing* relationships, because they become compliated in the explanation, which only futhers the issues of plot ^_^;. Though, if you keep with this idea, you may want to give a big history check as to how this power came to him and how it works.

~Ke-chan[/QUOTE]

1. Buru-su is the whole name, thank you. If you have a complaint to file, tell it to the people who run Names in Japanese.

2. It's my idea, right? So, you have to worry about yourself. And no, he uses a sudden wave of chi (that he has no idea about) to summon up a real-life image of the item/person/etc. he drew.

3. I know I may be a selfish person, but let's leave this be. You're just only the one person who's replied to this, so, more reviews count.

Thanks for your review, anyway. ^_^;

[Guest Millions_Knives]

Not a bad idea at all... there might be the stuff for a good manga in it.
That's one vote for "good", and one giant leap of spontaneous confidence.