RealHalfBreed Posted June 5, 2004 Share Posted June 5, 2004 Hey, these are my first two attempts at writing so I wanted to write about one of my fav shows Teen Titans and to be more specific the couple of Cyborg & Raven. They're not done yet, but I hope to have more added to them over the weekend. I would like to hear your reviews and if you have any ideas as long as they are postive towards Cy & Rae. Emotions only has 3 chapters done and Short Circuit only 1 so far, if you like them then I'll work harder to make sure that they are really good stories. [URL=http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1893265]http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1893265[/URL] [URL=http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1894797&time=1086425624]http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1894797&time=1086425624[/URL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minako Posted June 5, 2004 Share Posted June 5, 2004 I like it! The first one is kind of like a cliff-hanger, but it's kind of hard for me to swollow that they're not super heroes. (No Offense...:sweat: ) The second one, in my opinion is much better! Keep up the good work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RealHalfBreed Posted June 6, 2004 Author Share Posted June 6, 2004 no prob I hope you like what I put in after it. I await to her your review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minako Posted June 11, 2004 Share Posted June 11, 2004 [COLOR=DarkRed]Hello! Sorry it took so long! I read them both yesterday! I really enjoyed the one where [spoiler] Cyborg gets the virus...and the Ending! That's priceless! "don't you ever-do that-to me-again!" [/spoiler] I also liked the one where they were regular teens too! They are very well written! Keep up the good work! ~Minako[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RealHalfBreed Posted June 12, 2004 Author Share Posted June 12, 2004 thanks, I'm glad that you liked them! Be sure to check back on the one where they're regular teens because I hope to have more chapters up this weekend and I have another story coming up also. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Motfati Posted June 21, 2004 Share Posted June 21, 2004 LORD! OF COURSE YOU SHOULD FINISH THE FIRST ONE! IT WOULD BE A SIN NOT TO! I thought the first one was truly amazing (not that well written :rolleyes: , but whatever, I still got the picture). I loved it SO much. Maybe that's just because I'm a HUGE TTs freak (You should see me and my obsession... It's unhealthy, really.), or maybe it was just good and I'd go with both. Unfortunately, I didn't have enough time to read the second one [tear, tear] because... Well, that's not the point, but... really, the first one... I'm adding it to my favourites list, lol. Thank-you so much for giving me the link to that story of yours. It was... (tries to find the right word)... Well, let's just say I'll be reading it again. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RealHalfBreed Posted June 21, 2004 Author Share Posted June 21, 2004 alright alright, you convinced me to continue it lol. I'm a freak about Teen Titans too lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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