MoRbIdYuLiA Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 [CENTER][FONT=Century Gothic]I shed tears as we depart for a long journey my dusky, unwholesome thoughts run like adrenaline swiftly I reminisce about the faded memories that seem so far away as the dim days seems so depressing and overcast, so faded, so jaded and gray, my deep aspiration for the way things used to be eversince the angel of demise took your hand to leave this meserable bleak world and leave me for everlasting infinity. The aggravation and the tears that have broken me down for the dreadful and unmending years have finally collapsed from me into tears and caused paranoia from my own fears staining my jaded soul with a black hole leaving me with sorrow and feeling now emotions so hallow. My feelings have been drained, replacing them with the engraved burning pain I am left with the depression and I know I will never be the same. As my drops of tears fall silently like melancholy rain. My soul grasping for your everlasting touch, your sweet fragrance I devoured so much is foreign and stupefying to me like the spirit that has left me completely. Your immortal figure lingers through my dreams and mind and when I wake up, you are not to be found except for the chiming air that makes a sorrowful sound. Your demented, psychotic, Alluring, demonic, and hypnotic figure fantasizes me mentally I desire your presence no longer mentally, but physically but then I realize it's just a fantasy how I only crave for it to be reality. In the dead of the night I can hear your soothing voice chanting as the moonlighted mystical crescent shines above us all I look up at the misty night but you're not in sight. Suddenly I feel a unevitable cold embrace then I see your immortal figure standing before me everclear pure heavenly white lace I realize this is a celestial moment I dare not to waste I drift away and fall asleep in your arms. The next day there is no sign of you no trace it is then I realize I will never get another chance to be with you no matter what I do Never Again..[/FONT].[/CENTER] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 Very good I liked it. Also I was wondering if you ment it to have like every other paragraph rhyme? The rhyming of the poem felt, um streached (the best way i can describe it) at some points but other then those few times it was quite good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoRbIdYuLiA Posted June 25, 2004 Author Share Posted June 25, 2004 [font=Century Gothic][center]Raven's Sorrow [/center] [center][/font][font=Century Gothic]In the darkest hour of the night I listen to the Raven sing to the moon[/center] [center]Among the tranquility of silence in It's haven[/center] [center]Perched amongst the branch spilling It's sorrow to the sultry and forlorn night[/center] [center]that takes the night's breath away with It's mournfal cries.[/center] [center]Lonesome.[/center] [center]As the wind whispers silently to the naked ear.[/center] [center]The Raven chants on to the broken and deafening silence that hangs over the air suddenly the Raven flies across the dead sky filled with secrecies and seducing [/center] [center]mysteries. [/center] [center]Leaving no remains of It's presense behind but It's sorrowful tears[/center] . [/font][font=Century Gothic][b]A kiss for sweet serene bliss[/b] To get away from our miserable lives. [b]Hatred in a world sedated[/b] To bind and lock it away for everlasting eternity. [b]Social Distortion to our ignorant Nation[/b] To live for a world with violence and anarchy. [b]In a world filled with Rapists, and Robbers[/b] To absorb other's energy to one who has no courage nay confidence. [b]Runnaways leaving their families with apprehension[/b] To leave their troubles behind thinking they will distintigrate. [b]War and a Man who remains in the whitehouse while soldiers do his corrupted task[/b] To keep cover in his House while millions of men are massacred brutally day by day. [b]The world is awaiting It's Judgment Day...[/b] [b]the cause of HatredtragedyWar[/b]. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anne Rice, another talented writer. The very wording penetrates your very aspect of being in life just to go on to the next page for hours. It engulfs you in a way no other book has. I am greatly astounded by the word usage that describes the mood,thatspulls you in the book with such great stength, and last but not least the hollow and solitary existance of a miserbale vampire, not like no author has described with such perfect and exquisite detail. Mark my word, these books, you will eventually devour from page to page. I promise you with every cell of my little immortal black heart and soul. Here are the following: "Queen of the Damned" "Interview from the Vampire" "The Vampire Lestat" "The Vampire Armand" Do with thy what you wilt. I am merely showing you a different point of view from the life of a Vampire. Many wishes to you if you get it through without craving more, Just as I have done. I am sure you will despite all. yulia "We've hidden in the shadows for much too long..much to long... [center][font=Century Gothic]Because of You and Only You[/center] [center]As we are standing outside the balcony[/center] [center]the heavenly clear[/center] [center]pure air[/center] [center]surrounds us[/center] [center]as your shaggy black hair[/center] [center]gracefully blowing in the air makes me devouringly stare[/center] [center]the bright shining crescent hits your intense green eyes and pale structured face[/center] [center]this is a celestial moment I dare not to waste[/center] [center]carefully your grasp my hand as if it were made of porcelain and you were afraid to break it[/center] [center]it was then I noticed how delicate your touch was[/center] [center]at that moment you indured a lustful power over me[/center] [center]as if trying to break the silence that hung over us[/center] [center]you placed your lips on mine gently[/center] [center]From that moment on you became everything to me[/center] [center]every minute of the day I thought about you constantly[/center] [center]24.7 daydreaming wherever i went[/center] [center]anyone could have so it[/center] [center]I was so everclear[/center] [center]so transparent[/center] [center]a new feeling of warmth entered my jadd soul and soon became apart of me[/center] [center]fading away all the heart killing sorrow that haunted me so badly[/center] [center]I thanked the spirits for you and gave you all my love[/center] [center]to me you were like an angel sent from above[/center] [center]One cold afternoon as I was walking along the sidewalk[/center] [center]I found you hand and hand laughing with some girl and kissing[/center] [center]for the next month or so I layed in my damp room[/center] [center]crying all day[/center] [center]and all night[/center] [center]hiding myself from the sun and light[/center] [center]constantly sobbing tears throught the day[/center] [center]realizing i could not go on this way [/center] [center]I erased every memory of you from my head[/center] [center]to me I dont know you now to me [/center] [center]you have long been long since dead[/center] [center]I despise you for what you did to me[/center] [center]now because of you I can no longer trust anyone completely[/center] [center]now i will make sure[/center] [center]my heart is secure[/center] [center]when in a relationship[/center] [center]no more trusting partnership[/center] [center]it will take me a long time before I can gain[/center] [center]my trust I so recently lost again[/center] [center]because of you[/center] [center]and only you[/center] "this is dedicated to my former love who betrayed me and left me with the aching pain back in Japan" -yulia[/font] [font=Georgia]Chianna takes out her dagger. Her pale porcelain white face shows no expression as the celestial crescent shines above her. Pain takes over her forlorn body now abused with the chains and scrapes covered her body. Her eyes, jaded, show the pain she now is so accustomed to. Pain consumed her. She remembers so vividly of the abusing raping she received. Violated. Paranoia is part of her black soul. Her stomach growls fading away the utter silence that filled the chamber tower. The humid night, silver and cold, seems to make time stand still feeling like it could last a lifetime, forevermore. The wind whispers in her ear, chanting her demise. Memories appear and reappear in her head, only haunting her of the tragedy she received that night. [font=Georgia][/font] [font=Georgia]She walks up to a picture of herself now for many years lost in the shadows and forsaken, was once a happy child, vibrant, and healthy, looks at herself in the mirror, but sees no reflection/ Gosh what have I become? A cold, immortal, cruel and bitter, is what I have become. [/font] [font=Georgia]I did not know what have become of herself during this deep settled moonlight night . She found herself on the floor as she had been flung there brutally. Lost again. She rose on her feet, scanning the area to find a [/font] [font=Georgia]Herself in a chamber. Lying across the floor, were decayed flesh, which seemed have been long since forgotten. Maggots feasting upon the remains of the slaughtered man. I turned my head in distaste, not bearing a site of which my eyes could behold much longer. [/font] [font=Georgia]Tell me what you think on this fragments of a story. Give me critism! So i can fix what I am doing wrong.[/font] [font=Georgia]-yulia[/font] [font=Comic Sans MS][color=#c0c0c0]I tighten my arms around him Beckon him not to go. The rain falls like a streaming cascade. So swift and gracious?so luminously slow. The night whispers horrible tragedy, echoing thought this remote existence. I gaze in his hollow deepened eyes So expressionless and solemn? The years we spent together were divine. Now I feel the times reaching to its very end. The first time we laid eyes on each other it blissful. It was inevitable this tragedy would happen. No doubt. I cant bear this tension, this silence. It?s tightening the my insides in and out. Jaded, and abused, my heart only desires we could overcome this mental violence. Now in our sweetest torment we stand mute and lifeless. I can sense us being torn apart, unable to be woven back again. He walks away from me without speaking a not even the slightest utterance. Not at all attempting to glance back. Goodbye my sweetest sin. Crimson blood tears leave my eyes Pouring down my cheek resembling the melancholy drops of rain? The moon hits my depleted face spilling it?s sorrow, sharing her wretched misery. Paine consumes me and drowns me whole. Driving me into insanity as I realize myself falling in a fast abyss[/color][/font].[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Moss Hung cypresses hung beyond in a distance,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]on the tendrils agleam I gaze in discrete silence.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Such wondrous aglow, diminishing the pain I withhold.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Wisteria so sheerly incandescent,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]lingering is all the worthwhile for this everlasting purity.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Just for this evanescent moment of sweet blissful elation.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]I observe this moment enamored in fascination.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]In a remote existence, [/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]I stand mused by my own self-indulgence.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]One more cataclysmic occurrence[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Another to the heap?[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]Walking the woods in isolation,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]the night shines it?s sorrow down on me.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]A surge of unwelcome memories haunt me utterly[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]of my earlier period, almost vividly surreal, [/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]yet seeming so vague and concealed.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]A plea for this desire to become realism,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]the long lost perfume that till at this moment flusters me,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]is nothing more but a state of dreaming wistfully.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]That very fragrance that courses through my veins,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]sweeter than life itself, drives my spirit inane.[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]I knew peace only when I?m there,[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]it is my tranquility, my haven from despair?[/font] [font=Palatino Linotype]This is a poem about my longing for my home,Japan...[/font] [COLOR=Black][/font][font=Verdana][size=1][color=red]Please [i]do not[/i] double post. Otakuboards does not allow double posting. Simply edit your original post. If I find that you have double posted again, I will close this thread. -- Lady Asphyxia[/color][/size][/font][/COLOR] ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoRbIdYuLiA Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 -nods- ^_^. I will have new poems soon enough, I hope. :wigout: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 [font=Verdana][size=1]MoRbIdYuLiA, I have [color=black]already warned you about double posting. OB's rules do not allow it, as I have already told you. If you want to post your new poems, you'll have to start another thread.[/color][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font][font=Verdana][size=1][color=#ff0000][/color][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][color=black]Thread Closed.[/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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