Guest CB Kyra Posted June 24, 2004 Share Posted June 24, 2004 [FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1][COLOR=SlateGray]Does anyone believe that if you do something 100 times that on the 101st try you'll get it right? I think so, because I've writen about 100 fan fictions or poems or whatever and on the 100th time they start getting good. I wonder why that is... Oh well, even though I think my stuff is good, it probably sucks and it'll never amount to anything. I dug up one of my few poems that actually turned out quite nicely, or at least I think so... [CENTER][U]My Romeo[/U] I loved you for all of those six years You pissed me off, you broke me, I publically declared my hade and left you standing ther It lasted for about a month But then my pain would subside Now she's fallen for you I'm in the middle And I'm quickly finding that I'm fallin' for you to How can a truth I've lived for so long suddenly become just a lie? A cover for my true emotions? I want to tell you, But I can't. I know you don't love me, I know you don't care. And she would kill me if she knew. So I'm simply stuck here, Waiting for my Romeo.[/CENTER] This poem was originally called, "Forbiden Romance", but the girl I talk about in the poem ('she'd kill me if she knew') read it and sugested that I change the title to my Romeo.... It's crap isn't it?[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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