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[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1][COLOR=SlateGray]Does anyone believe that if you do something 100 times that on the 101st try you'll get it right? I think so, because I've writen about 100 fan fictions or poems or whatever and on the 100th time they start getting good. I wonder why that is... Oh well, even though I think my stuff is good, it probably sucks and it'll never amount to anything.
I dug up one of my few poems that actually turned out quite nicely, or at least I think so...


[CENTER][U]My Romeo[/U]
I loved you for all of those six years
You pissed me off, you broke me,
I publically declared my hade and left you standing ther
It lasted for about a month
But then my pain would subside
Now she's fallen for you
I'm in the middle
And I'm quickly finding that I'm fallin' for you to
How can a truth I've lived for so long suddenly become just a lie?
A cover for my true emotions?
I want to tell you,
But I can't.
I know you don't love me,
I know you don't care.
And she would kill me if she knew.
So I'm simply stuck here,
Waiting for my Romeo.[/CENTER]


This poem was originally called, "Forbiden Romance", but the girl I talk about in the poem ('she'd kill me if she knew') read it and sugested that I change the title to my Romeo....
It's crap isn't it?[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]
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