Writing Living in the fear

[Pawn114]

[I]In this world,
Of twilight dawn and give,
Feeding in the darkness,
Breathing in the scent,
Of mankinds failure,

Living in the fear,
Blackness penetrates deep,
Citidal high above,
Contempt to those below,
Seed of death they will sow.

What hath befallen,
This Civilization nestled deep,
Deep within its fear,
Breathing in the scent,
Of mankinds failure.[/I]

Note: I dont really know -what- it means, per se... I think it can be interprited many
ways, or it could just suck ^.^ . Once more, wrote off of the top of my head, during making the post (why do I keep meaning to make something else, then do a poem... grr..). Listening to cradle of filth when this was being written, so sort of explains the fear. I see it as mankind has failed and lives with its own fear, the citidal is like the place of the gods, who look down with contempt and feel no need to help any, letting everyone die. Feel free to say it sucks :laugh:

-Pawn

[shadow15]

your a pretty good poet you should publish you really soul hey I have one of my shorterand calmer poems on the board will you checkit out I ask you this cuz your a good poet
shadow15