Flo Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 My friends say that my drawlings of anime and manga characters don't look right. I'm not sure what they're missing. Constructive criticism is needed. I don't care how mean or bad the criticism is. If you have any sugestions please tell me! The first one is of Hinata from Nartuo and the second one is of Rath from the manga Dragon Knights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cysword6 Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 Well the first one seems like the parts just don't match up right. The second one though looks really good. If you just made the parts more of the same size like the head and neck and stuff then it would look a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 [size=1]Well, adding pupils to the eyes might help a bit. In the colored one, take a good look at her (it is a her, right?) face. The eye on the right is too far over. The hair also looks a bit wonky, but that's a matter of practice and style. The face of the second one looks alright, through I can't really tell what the outfit is, exactly. My main suggestion would be to take more care with your lines and pay attention to what you're doing. Your pictures seem kinda...rushed. Lines going all over the place for no apparent reason.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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