DeathKnight Posted October 30, 2001 Share Posted October 30, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by ShadowGohan [/i] [B] [SIZE=1]I can write you a story. Bwahahahahaha... ermm...[/SIZE] [/B][/QUOTE] [color=crimson][b][size=1]Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!:cross: *ahem* yea.... Alright... anyway.... I love writing evil... stories... with necromancers.... heh... and.... Death Knights :demon: Most of my poems are dark and evil.... evil.... [/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mornigndew Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [color=blue] I read all the poems, it's very good, I like LM's poem, the one about winter. Here is my. Not too good. Show me the true meaning of loneliness Deep from the dark, within the cold Tell me the loneliness that being told Cover the light, hide all happiness Tell me more about the darkness Secretly attacking the mind Kill the hopes, destroying the kind Bring the world into sadness Show me the heart that's no longer beat Living in the world without soul No smiles or laughters, except woe All the loves slowly being eat Life without love Like breathing without air Slowing dying With no-one to care [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1]Very nice poem, Dew :D [/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Majin Gohan Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 You, My Friend, are Faceless by Cheyne R. Trost Your existence is erased You no longer have a name You no longer have a face You did this yourself, you are a shame You have only yourself to blame You were gone into thin air You never had a chance to say goodbye You acted like an idiot and didn't care That is why you had to die You acted like a jerk and now are friendless You, my friend, now are faceless This poem I found pretty weird to me. It's based on banning on a message board but as if it were in real life just disappearing into thin air b/c you acted like a stupid fool. I don't really think this is a good poem. I don't know why I rhymed because I'm not good at it ,but I hope it was somewhat enjoyable. To everybody else nice poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pastbyer Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 I'm not as good as writing poems as everyone else here, but here's some: -------------------- [size=1][b]Untitled[/b] Why do I feel so warm When my heart is filled with ice? Why do I run and hide, When you?re always so nice? Why am I so lonely When people are surrounding me? Why do I chase the devil When God is just beyond that tree? Why do I feel so happy When my life is filled with pain? Why do I hate sunshine, And instead love the rain? It?s because of you, isn?t it? My imaginary friend. You?ll tease me forever, To absolute no end. It's because you are part of me; The star out of the blue. And that I'm cursed to forever be In silent lust with you. --------------- Um... That one was kind of written about my (half-imaginary) friend. Um... Please don't laugh, he's pretty real you know. *points to a guy behind her* Only.... yeah.... --------------- [b]Shadow[/b] I am everything you're not. I have everything you don't. I love everything you hate, And vomit everything you ate. I am your own shadow, Always your opposite. On the other side of the mirror, The shadow that will never shiver. But when you grow up, And get your own ideas. I'll leave, and be somewhere else, Living or dying in another house. ----------------- And that one was about... Something. I just come up with these things and figure out the meanings later. ----------------- Oh, and another poem in my sig.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1] all these poems are what i feel... my hell... welcome to it.... leave it you want... it gets darker from here.... into the depths of what i am.... this is deep... deeper than many care to go.... into the darkness this pain has turned me into...... me..... enjoy.... ~What i am~ Drive the nails into my flesh... Do it... Let the blood flow... Destroy my soul... Show the true form of me... A shell of a soul... Nuttin more... Nuttin less... Loveless.. Emotionless.. cold... Dark... Evil... Nightmarish me... The souless demon... That this world has changed me to... Let me die... Before i cause more chaos... Let my blood flow, Into the Darkest Depths of hell... Let me lurk in the shadows... Let me be what i am... The Shell of a Soul... ~God Bless~ I confront the Demons everyday, Dont we all? The God that we love, Cannot save us all... I am Damned from the start... Made to slave for a person, Made to be a Nightmare... I am A Soul... arent i? Dark... Evil... A Soul... just as you are... I bleed... as you bleed... God Bless me... The damned one.... ~Blood~ It flows... from me... From the wrist... I have nothing left... Its over now... My past is on the floor... a red liquid... Is it over? no a few more seconds... I'm Sorry for being what i am... sorry for the things i did... and said... The time has come... The Knife has done its duty... The Wrist opened up... The blood splattered around me... The things i loved surrond me... Screaming... What have you done Ken? Saved you all the trouble... Saved you the trouble... I remember my nightmare of a life... I hurt those i loved... I dont deserve to live... Ken is no more... Its coming... the light is shineing... Its time... .....Silence.... Its over... Complete... silence... ~ChAoS~ The chaos surronds me... A hellstorm... The Fury of the storm rocks my world... The Dark chaos Of the World... the Darkness of my Soul... It pours out across the world... People turn their head... I walk the street... It is Ken... The Souless One... the Evil one... ~Nightmare~ I walk in my world... Lightning flashes... Thunder claps... Its dark and damp... I run looking.. Looking for a soul... Blood lays on the floor... Corpses everywhere... I yell out in pain and suffering... What happened here... My parents lay headless... My friends... dead... I look franticly... I Come To A Shadowed Figure... I yell at Him... he turns around... And its me... I am the evil that did this... I start to sob... then i wake up... ~The True Form Of Life~ I wonder why i'm here... To Die a worthless life... I bleed... I die... Thats it? Theres nothing more? Why am i here then!?! You want me to live a nightmare to die! Why dont i end it now? Let the blood flow down my arm... Down into the floor... Let me Die!!! Life is nothing more than a lie! i am nothing more than a slave! A slave To Someone Esle! Then... i die... ~~ Pain ~~ The Rain Falls Slowly, As i sit here and htink about you... Pain... in the rain... how ironic... To Bleed in The Tears of the Clouds... Inside i have rotted... Bleeding on the outside... Bleeding on the inside... I hold it in... I shield myself from anything postive... Darkness is my life... Evil... Dark... Nightmarish.... All those discribe me.. Leave me alone.. Dont try to help... I want to be in the dark... nothing left for me... [/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1]~ Angel ~ You my angel... I watched you slowly fly away... I am nothing without you... Please return to me... There's so much that i need to say... But never said... I need you... I want you... Your voice is a song... Your walk is a beutiful dance... You eyes sparkle.... I Love you... But i never got to say i do... My angel... Dedicated to Nelly.... My Angel... whom i have lost....[/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [SIZE=1]Ken... you too are also very amazing... that poem is excellent. Dya lke mine/?[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted October 31, 2001 Share Posted October 31, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1]Thank you SG :cross: [/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 ah heck, I don't do many poems, but here goes.... Painless Bird By Moe Murad [email]super_saiyan_jin_4_vegeta@hotmail.com[/email] my body feels as if it is burning I open my eyes everyday and see nothing but pain I lie here, on this hospital bed thinking wondering when the time for me to depart this world will arrive I gaze at the smiles of small children walking on wings, without a care in the world I look out of my window, forever looking into the distance people, people are walking outside a cab, a yellow cab is picking up a person tree's, nature's life, and life's nature, one and the same I see a knife next to my bed, sharp as the pains in my stomach picking it up, I glare at my own reflection within the blade life is kind of like a knife short, long, what does it matter, it all ends sometime dangling from my hand, its tip facing down the strings of life, they bare us all I arise from my bed, and look out of my window one foot at a time, the way I was tol as a child looking down towards the ground, so far away I smiled, and flew like a beautiful bird.... ack, I don't think that was too good.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 The Bird stands there, Resting on the Limb of Life, And the Limb of Death. It sits there, pondering, Waiting, Preparing. Why do it do so? What purpose does it have? Has it been sent as a messenger? Has it been sent as a destroyer? The Child plays, careless and Free, Not caring of the Worries of others, He is innocent, he has no Worries. But the Bird does: How will I take Him? Will I save Him, Then destroy Him? How can He not? How can the Child not know? How can we save him? Must He be set free? Or must we catch Him? Should we let him go? The Bird does not wait, He takes the Child, And does not Fear. For the Bird has been sent, Sent by Death. Why take the child? Why, oh, why? What did one of such innocents do, To One who takes many? Why did he take Him? This is the question, That has no Answer. This't be the question that face many, Many, Many, Now. But, wait, The Taker has been Taken. The Child now will forever Be Free, To Be Innocent, To Be Careless, To Be forever Happy. In memory to all that died in the events of Sept. 11, and to my dear friend, who was taken all too soon from his Family by a hit-and-run accident. -Neil, [email]SuperSayian4444@aol.com[/email] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pastbyer Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 Aw... Nice poems everyone... Wish I was as good. *sighs* Oh, and I almost forgot about [EMAIL=pastbyer@hotmail.com]my email [/EMAIL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 You thought mine was good? Or was that a general statement? I feel mine is pale in comparison to all of these. Peace! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 meh, I just wrote mine 10 miinutes before I posted it.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 10 MINUTES?! *Jaw drops in shock* Mine took me over 3 hours!!! Now I'm jealeos!!! Oh, well. It was very well thought out(Sephiroth's). OK, just a lil commntary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [SIZE=1]Ehhh.... mine took me about 20 mins... OH! email=[EMAIL=EBISAMERU]ShadowForm01@aol.com[/EMAIL][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SuperSayian4444 [/i] [B]10 MINUTES?! *Jaw drops in shock* Mine took me over 3 hours!!! Now I'm jealeos!!! Oh, well. It was very well thought out(Sephiroth's). OK, just a lil commntary [/B][/QUOTE] erm, thanks I guess, I hardly ever do any poems, that was like, the 3rd poem I've ever done in my life, I didn't even think I did it like a poem was supposed to be done.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Sephiroth [/i] [B] erm, thanks I guess, I hardly ever do any poems, that was like, the 3rd poem I've ever done in my life, I didn't even think I did it like a poem was supposed to be done.... [/B][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Well, it's pretty good... considering you don't write poems much, it's really good...[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Videl~ Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 By day I shield my eyes from the garish "real world" At night I leave them open running from the creeping darkness in my soul. Surrounded by friends and family yet I always am so alone, I retreat to my safe haven inside my head. Prison of flesh and bone. Outside the pettyness and chaos drive me inside myself. But inside is no better, the constant battle with my light always just ahead of the creeping blackness. This coldness inside me is like a dead weight destined forever to be carried in the warm place where my soul should rest. YOU put it there, but your memory is what keeps me chained to this millstone of self doubt anger and hate. Free me! But even now something inside, some little remaing spark of me knows that only I can free myself from the internal prison laid on me. One day the flames of my soul rekindled only by a kind of love I have yet to feel, will burn away my prison sear away the weak flesh. Then I will be revealed in all the beauty no-one else sees. In the meantime I will wait. Biding my time knowing one day I will soar free. And you will be forever trapped in the enduring bleakness of you black unfeeling soul. Untitled By Andra Williams This is about someone who hurt me a lot. Nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1]Very nice Videl.... good poem...[/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Videl~ Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DeathKnight [/i] [B][color=crimson][b][size=1]Very nice Videl.... good poem...[/color][/b][/size] [/B][/QUOTE] It wasn't finished. I posted it by accident!:o Don't ask me how I haven't a clue but read it now it's finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [color=crimson][b][size=1]Even better.... good poem.... :whoops: [/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Videl~ Posted November 1, 2001 Share Posted November 1, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DeathKnight [/i] [B][color=crimson][b][size=1]Even better.... good poem.... :whoops: [/color][/b][/size] [/B][/QUOTE] Thanks ;) I really liked yours too. Someone else living in that dark place...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 2, 2001 Share Posted November 2, 2001 Wow that is a good poem Seph and Videl!:mrt: :toothy: :box: :therock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gally Posted November 2, 2001 Share Posted November 2, 2001 [SIZE=1]Wow. Those are all amazing. I'm afraid to post my poems and have them compared to everyone else's...(Chris, that poem was amazing! Why didn't you ever share it before? :p ) But...one long one and one short one. *takes a deep breath* (Neither one have a title, either...) Did you try To take the path That opened easily? Lost inside Yourself, you lose More than you can see A million times I've tried to warn Your feet to watch themselves But you continued Aimlessly, not glancing Back, I could tell You guessed the road Was easy dirt, A rockless, simple tread While you were looking Deep inside I looked far ahead And saw the road Curve up and back With barriers and sand The shadows formed From empty friends Who stole from your dead hands They keep on reaching For you now As you blind yourself I give in And push them out I'm sick of worthless help They follow you And your sight To look inside, I know But they see air And so do I Your heart echos hollow You were looking Through yourself But just a bit too far You caught a glimpse Of someone's happiness On that far, far away star Don't compare Me to you Or yourself to it You've lost my heart And misplaced your soul Amid all this vanity sh*t. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Lie Awake amid the dirt You have dug yourself Walked upon By nameless faces Lost inside themselves Pulling through The crowds, to reach A darker path than this They stumble on Your face, your hands, Spikes sticking to their feet One spike stays Point trapped within Your heart, inside your chest That face recieves A name just then Lie Await your death. Um...explaination? Well, for anyone who made it through the whole first one...(soo long...gomen. ^_^;;; ) I wrote that when I was having problems with certain people...Chris, Cammy, you guys would know who...¬.¬ Lotsa stuff came crashing down then...and that poem just kinda came out. *_* The second one...my attempt at a moral in a poem. I dunno what else, since I can't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it...:drunk:[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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