Writing Deep In The Night(Poem)

[Guest MangaFreak]

Hey I know this may seem a little... girlie but I just wanted to post it any way!
Ya, I'm kind of an igit, but I don't realy care though.

[CENTER]Deep in the night, I hear you again
Calling my name and I see you waiting for me,
But time passes by and you leave again
But I?ll never give up till your spirits free;

Every night, I wish on the stars
That you will return and live in my heart,
But memories fade and you seem so far
But once you arrive we won?t split apart;

Deep in the night, I dream of you
Back in my arms and holding me tight,
My eyes are filled with tears that refresh with new
But people must wake and it leaves with the night;

Every night, I see your face
The smile like the dawn and the joy in your soul,
But then you fade away with out leaving a trace
And inside my spirit is left a dark hole;

Deep in the night, I feel you against me
the warmth of your touch and your voice in my ear,
but when I open my eyes you?re not with me
and there?s no proof you were ever here;

Every night, I think of you
of all the things we could have been together,
I thought we were going to be one of the few
but it seems you?ll remain lost to me forever

Deep in the night, I hear you again
Calling my name and I see you waiting for me,
But time passes by and you leave again
But I?ll never give up till your spirits free;

Every night, I wish on the stars
That you will return and live in my heart,
But memories fade and you seem so far
But once you arrive we won?t split apart;[/CENTER]
what do you guys think?

[Persona]

[COLOR=RoyalBlue] [CENTER]Well to me I think the poem was great. I loved it no matter how girlie it was and no you're not an igit ok. I hope you write more and don't give up ok. Much Love from you OB friend who cares. I can actually vision it in my mind word by word with some guy I soon will meet.[/CENTER][/COLOR]

[Guest MangaFreak]

[quote name='SadAngel][COLOR=RoyalBlue] [CENTER]Well to me I think the poem was great. I loved it no matter how girlie it was and no you're not an igit ok. I hope you write more and don't give up ok. Much Love from you OB friend who cares. I can actually vision it in my mind word by word with some guy I soon will meet.[/CENTER'][/COLOR][/quote]
Aww, thanks but if you asked some one who knew me... me and poetry in the same sentance makes an oxymoron
I'm a regular moron...
lol
jk
But heres one I realy like

[SIZE=1]Fading Memories

Time goes by so fast
nothing ever lasts
except memories of you
I'm waiting in the night
feel lonelyness and fright
and my dreams are few
The rain just keeps pouring down
wearing an uncomfortably frown
and I only have one thought
Of you and me together
how we could've made it through forever
no, I never forgot
Images fly by
they just take off to the sky
and they make me feel alone
Where ever you are
wether near or far
that will always be my home
We were laying on the grass
when you had to ask
why I had chose you
I looked into your face
such a visable trace
of the boy I knew
So I whispered in your ear
the words you wished to hear
and all else melted away
All the pain we had, left
all the misery we had kept
vanished with yeserday
You held me in your arms
kept me safe from harm
and threw me up so high
I didn't have a care
as you ran your fingers through my hair
and I felt like I could fly
But then every thing fell apart
nothings left of my heart
why had it gone so wrong
You promised you'd come back
we'd have a good laugh
but I've been waiting so long
I'm sitting in a tree
wondering do you remember me
do you remember being here
when you said I'd be alright
that I could make it through the night
were you being sincere?
I still remember that time
when you said you were mine
and that it would be ok
You watched me in my sleep
held me in your keep
please come back today
My memories only bring pain
nothing will ever be the same
and I miss your gentle touch
Your smooth fingertips
the warmth of your lips
turns out everything isn?t enough
Just hold me close
never let me go
oh why can't you see
Come back tonight
or I'll die
oh why can't you set me free
I see you standing in the rain
you still look the very same
as when you left a year ago
There?s a smile on your face
still a visible trace
of the boy I use to know
I'm stumbling toward you
whispering I missed you
and that I'm glad your home
hold me forever close
never ever let me go
So I'll never feel alone[/SIZE]