Krycifer Posted July 28, 2004 Share Posted July 28, 2004 Story:Long ago Mithos was the Chosen to regenerate the world.The Chosen is the only one that can regenerate the world and stop the Desians.The world was infested with Desians.Desians are half elves who want to destroy the world.They have human ranches and in the human ranches the Desians are placing exspheres on the humans.Exspheres are powerful spheres that can cause havoc without a key crest.Mithos had succeded in his journey and the Desians were sealed away. Years later the Desians escaped.Then a young girl named Collette was born.She was to be the next Chosen.Years later Collette was 12.While in class Professor Raine was giving a lesson about Mithos.Lloyd Irving one of Collette's friends was asleep in class again.Proffesor Raine had to wake up Lloyd. Proffesor Raine asked Llyod a question and he couldn't answer the question.So she asked Genis to answer it one of Lloyd and Collette's friends.Genis had answered the question right.Then Lloyd and Collette saw a light.Then Proffesor Raine went to the Church of Martel and asked everyone to stay in class and study. Collette wanted to go with Raine but Raine told her to stay in class.If the church needed her they would come for her.But Lloyd went to go to the Church of Martel but Genis had stoped him then the Preist came in the class and he was wounded.He asked Collette to go to the Church.After that he died.So they set off to the Church. I need someone to be Collette in the RP she is the most important character in the RP. Sign up: Name: Age: Gender: Occupation: Weapons: (max 2) Special attack: (max 2) Bio: (optional) O.k now here's my sign up: Name:Lloyd Age: 12 Gender:Male Occupation:Traveling with the Chosen Weapons:Twin Swords Special attack: Psi tempest: an attack where Kratos jumps in the air and does a vertical sword attack,Beast: Kratos hits his enemies with his shoulder and then stabs them. Bio:Lloyds mother was killed by his father because of his mother's exsphere she transformed into a creature so Lloyd's father had no choice.Then Lloyds father was killed then an elf named Dirk found Lloyd and his mother.His mother was lying there with Lloyd.Dirk had taken Llyod and raised him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadia Posted July 28, 2004 Share Posted July 28, 2004 [size=1][color="#993300"]Sesshomuru, hold the phone, please. There's a couple things you must do in here before you continue. The first is to create a more adequate background for the RPG. Perhaps you've got all the ideas in your head, and you just need to write them down. Well, this would be the time and place to do that. All RPGs must have a few decent paragraphs relating to the story in some way or another. One simply does not cut it. Explain the Chosen a little more, describe who the Desians are, maybe write a brief history lesson... whatever you choose to do, know that you [i]must[/i] put more effort into the backstory. The thread will be closed if you don't. Second, when you post a sign-up, please remember to post the finished result, not what you've written so far in the little time you have. If it's not finished, don't post it. A lot of people on the boards still do this and we're trying to cut it down. So please, be an example and make sure that all sign-ups are actually complete before they go up. Remember to read through OB's rules, as well as the stickies at the top of this forum. A lot of changes have been made recently and it would do everyone well to catch up with them. If you have any question afterwards, feel free to PM myself or terra and we'll help clear things up. - Arcadia[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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