Writing InuYasha Fanfic : Forgotten Return of Kokushibyou

[Trigun 11]

Okay Here's a Fan Fic I worked on a while ago when I was in school. InuYasha Of Course. Dark Orange is in Feudal Era. Green is Present Day. I'll Post more of it when I start getting reviews
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[COLOR=DarkGreen]Two boys and a girl are in front of the high school, obviously a Japanese high school. ? Give me a fast ball Kailen?. Right Here? the boy padded his mitt as the girl ?Kailen? replied with a smirk .? You can?t handle my fast ball Devin, Heck it?s faster than yours!? Kailen pitches the fast ball without warning, with Devin catching it and falling backwards. The Other boy , Eric laughed " Ha Devin! She CAN out pitch you. It?s Frickin? hilarious.?. His glance is caught by a group of boys looking at Kailen . ? Hey Girlie, pitch it over here!? one of the boys in the group yells over to Kailen. Kailen nods as she readies her pitch , her hands tightly grasping the ball.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=DarkOrange]
Mean while Sango and Miroku pull InuYasha and Kagome apart ? IT?S NOT MY FAULT! Blame my mother. SHE signed me up for it. Three Americans. 2 boys and a girl.. This should be?.? Miroku interrupts her . ? A young lady you say?? InuYasha smacks him upside his head. ? Stupid, Only me and stupid over there can pass thru the well ?? SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! ? Sango smirks as she says ? Big Sit.? Miroku seems disappointed ?You always have to ruin my fun don?t you??[/COLOR]


[COLOR=DarkGreen]School lets out. Kailen runs down the street, Devin and Eric Trailing after her." Wait up Kailen!". They Arrive at Kagome's house. Kailen takes off her shoes and puts her slippers on. The boys do the same." Hello Kailen, Devin. Eric." " Hello Mrs. Higurashi."
-Kailen begins to do her homework, She Does it quickly cause It comes easy to her.- " Darn Kailen. What are ya going to do?"
" Go out Of course"
- Kailen gets up and heads out the door. Her attention is caught by the Bone Eater's well.She peers in. She sits on the edge of it. The boys follow. They begin pushing each other around and Kailen falls in. The boys jump down to see if she's allright-
" You Okay?"
" Yeah."
" Let's get out of here". Devin motions for Kailen to be boosted up-
"-Kailen points to her skirt-
"ARE YOU CRAZY? I'm not going you two are."
Eric shakes his head. " Oh be Quiet Ms. I'm mad cause my uniform for school is a skirt!"[/COLOR]
[COLOR=DarkOrange]Kailen yells at the two for a bit longer. She finally boosts the two boys up.
" Uh Oh.... Kailen... Get Up Here"
Kailen is pulled up and out of the well. She dusts her self off and looks up. She shakes her head at a group of males wearing dog ears. She thought they were just joking around in costumes
" Nice Costumes Boys"
" These aren't costumes. We thought you we're demons. We heard you 20 leagues away. Just Pathetic Humans is what we found. And a Wench" The Demon smirks. Kailen pops her knuckles. " Wench? You haven't seen anything yet[/COLOR]

[Dragons_Bait15]

DUde it's quite awsome and you put some spin on it please continue. ~.^

[Dark'sgirl15]

Oh wooow! cool! i love it! 10 out of 10! well if your wondering who i am i'm a new member on this site! YAY JUST TODAY I GOT ON! i hope to look forward to your posts to me thank you very much!
JA! :animesmil :catgirl:

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