Persona Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Mind Games [color=royalblue]Pulled out of the dream and thus out of slumber, suddenly trembling and aware of how cold the room had become since Rose had fallen asleep. She bolted upright atop the bed, disturbing the rough sheets that laid beneath her. Eyes closed once again, chin quivering from the cold. Suddenly choking on the air she was breathing in as the shock of realizing that she was not at home. Streams of water turned into drops of water that were as beautiful as crystals, just as beautiful as the person who owned them. Her hazel opals held images of pain and hidden hatred Rose had never shown. As she stared into space, lost completely from the real world, wondering why she is here and what she had done to deserve such a cruel punishment. Her light pink lips quivered as she cried, Rose snapped back to reality or what she thought was reality. She yelled from the top of her lungs, ?WHY AM I HERE? SOMEBODY please HELP ME !?. The long halls echoed with footsteps upon the white floor, the room was dark, shadowed and had no windows. Rose bursted out and grabbed her pillow. She slammed the pillow around, desperately trying to seek the answers to her questions. She whispered in sorrow, ?Please?Someone please tell me?Were am I?? The door opened to her room quietly as possible, there stood a handsome young man. He was a slim tall figure by the name of Raphael. His sky blue eyes never leaving hers as he approached her delicate form curled up in the corner. A few lost tears trailed down his cheeks. Raphael footsteps echoed, suddenly Rose looked up with those medium hazel orbs, glimmering with tears. Silence filled the room and was becoming uncomfortable and she?she looked so frail?like a child. Raphael would have given anything to hold her close. Suddenly she spoke, voice so strong and tears stopped, she wiped away the remaining trails upon her soft caramel face and stood up. ?Did you do this to me?? Raphael immediately looked up but avoiding her gaze and said, ?No, My delicate flower. You?ve been in this mental institute for five months now. Look?All I know is that the doctors told me that you experienced a tremendous trauma, while I was away. They said ever since that happened you went to your own world and you wouldn?t snap back to reality. Now I?m glad you did snap out. Silence once again filled the room, feeling the need to break the silence again, he spoke in a needy voice ?Please?Tell me.? The agony in his beloved eyes still remained. Suddenly he felt himself trembling of the wonderful sensation of her hand upon his. Rose spoke in a gentle voice, ?Take me away from this horrid place.? She looked so pale?pale as a ghost. He felt her hand so weak and timid, but at the same time soft like a feather and delicate as a rose petal. Raphael looked into her haze eyes that held emptiness, like a black hole. He put his face beside hers and whispered, ? No matter what I?ll always love you.? She looked deep into his sky blue eyes, then her vision darkened until she no longer saw anything, but pitch black. She could barely here Raphael screaming for help, then?nothing. Hey, this is to any moderator in charge her. Can you lock this up. This is just a total failure. TY! [font=Verdana][size=1][color=red]Please don't double post. Just edit your post to include the additional message. If you want me to close one of your threads in future, just PM me. If you want to know who the moderator of a forum is, scroll down the screen; the name is in a little box at the bottom. ^.~ -- Lady Asphyxia[/color][/size][/font] [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 [FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=DarkGreen] No! Finish the story first! It may sound awful to you at first (trust me, it doesn't), but you can always revise it to fit your taste later on. [/COLOR][/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 [font=Verdana][size=1]Closed because the author requested it, although personally I quite liked the story. Sure, there are a few bits that could be improved; but no story doesn't have those bits, heh. If you decide you want the story opened again, just PM me. [/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1]Lady Asphyxia.[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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