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[The Story]

In the holy wars of demons and angels, the dark forces forged a sword of immense power from their leader, Leithen. The blade was an mixture of one of his fangs and his thick blood, which formed a sword so powerful, that in the right hands, even would Gods feared it. The demonic forces controlled the strongest sword that ever was created, and when word of the crimson blade came to angel?s ears, it was soon thought to that the darkness would prevail in the war. But it was soon found out that no demonic being could wield it, and after they lost the war, the angels sealed it away with great magic.

The year is now 2020 A.D. In 2018 A.D., a man who went by the name Louis McHeart found the evil blade. He had read about it?s great power in myths when he was young, and always dreamed about holding the hilt of the sword which could take the lives of all demons, or control a vase army of all of the creatures of death. Soon, that dream became reality, and he found it laying with magic chains that had weaken from since the great war of darkness and light. Once he touched the blade, it soon started to poison his mind. Slowly, day by day, the blade stole Louis?s sanity, which he was soon left with little to spare. His features that made him man soon turned demonic, and he set off with the blade. Now, Louis McHeart, who now goes by ?Leithen? wages war with the rest of the world with his army of darkness.

Though, this is not a normal war. Leithen does not want war with the nations mechanical weapons, but with the warriors of them. His demons attack small areas of nations, making governments put a bounty on his head. He hopes his warriors are full of hate, revenge, greed, and much more, for he wants them as his puppets, for he is the marionette.

[Info]

If you have been here before V.7, you may remember that I tried this ideal before. Though, it never got off, like all my other RPG?s. But, I hope this one is very different. See, when James made Kill Adam(a great RPG), a lot of people though ?Why didn?t I think of that!? Well, they though that because James introduced a Chapter like system, that made it different from other RPGs. This RPG is based on Fighting games, one of my favorite kind of games. You may notice that the story has elements from games like Soul Caliber II, with a little bit of Guilty Gear X in the mix.

First off, this RPG replaces chapters with ?Fights?. Fights can range from 1 on 1, 2 on 2, or a free for all between a certain amount of people. I?ll post the location, what type of fight it is going to be, and who is going to fight. There will be no killing of each other, and being the winner means little in the RPG. The members of the fight will get a PM from me, and we will discuss who will be the winner through PM or AIM if all of us have.

I will post a thread for the RPG in Arena Underground. There, you can post questions about the RPG, and what characters you want your?s to be allied or rivaled against and why. I will also post information about upcoming Fights, and Win/Losses and maybe even ties.


That will be the first halve of the RPG. I hope this does have some success. But do mind the RPG will be rated PG-13 for Violence, some Language, and some Sexual themes(what is a fighting game without women who aren?t very clothed *sigh*).

I won?t want generic fighting characters, and I am hopping I will get characters as wacky as the Guilty Gear series. I do have plans to end it the RPG when I feel it has boiled to just fighting, and I plan to add special fights like bosses, and that?s pretty much it.

Well, I hope I get some feedback now.
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[QUOTE=Ayokano][The Story]

In the holy wars of demons and angels, the dark forces forged a sword of immense power from their leader, Leithen. The blade was an mixture of one of his fangs and his thick blood, which formed a sword so powerful, that in the right hands, even would Gods feared it. The demonic forces controlled the strongest sword that ever was created, and when word of the crimson blade came to angel?s ears, it was soon thought to that the darkness would prevail in the war. But it was soon found out that no demonic being could wield it, and after they lost the war, the angels sealed it away with great magic.

The year is now 2020 A.D. In 2018 A.D., a man who went by the name Louis McHeart found the evil blade. He had read about it?s great power in myths when he was young, and always dreamed about holding the hilt of the sword which could take the lives of all demons, or control a vase army of all of the creatures of death. Soon, that dream became reality, and he found it laying with magic chains that had weaken from since the great war of darkness and light. Once he touched the blade, it soon started to poison his mind. Slowly, day by day, the blade stole Louis?s sanity, which he was soon left with little to spare. His features that made him man soon turned demonic, and he set off with the blade. Now, Louis McHeart, who now goes by ?Leithen? wages war with the rest of the world with his army of darkness.

Though, this is not a normal war. Leithen does not want war with the nations mechanical weapons, but with the warriors of them. His demons attack small areas of nations, making governments put a bounty on his head. He hopes his warriors are full of hate, revenge, greed, and much more, for he wants them as his puppets, for he is the marionette.

[Info]

If you have been here before V.7, you may remember that I tried this ideal before. Though, it never got off, like all my other RPG?s. But, I hope this one is very different. See, when James made Kill Adam(a great RPG), a lot of people though ?Why didn?t I think of that!? Well, they though that because James introduced a Chapter like system, that made it different from other RPGs. This RPG is based on Fighting games, one of my favorite kind of games. You may notice that the story has elements from games like Soul Caliber II, with a little bit of Guilty Gear X in the mix.

First off, this RPG replaces chapters with ?Fights?. Fights can range from 1 on 1, 2 on 2, or a free for all between a certain amount of people. I?ll post the location, what type of fight it is going to be, and who is going to fight. There will be no killing of each other, and being the winner means little in the RPG. The members of the fight will get a PM from me, and we will discuss who will be the winner through PM or AIM if all of us have.

I will post a thread for the RPG in Arena Underground. There, you can post questions about the RPG, and what characters you want your?s to be allied or rivaled against and why. I will also post information about upcoming Fights, and Win/Losses and maybe even ties.


That will be the first halve of the RPG. I hope this does have some success. But do mind the RPG will be rated PG-13 for Violence, some Language, and some Sexual themes(what is a fighting game without women who aren?t very clothed *sigh*).

I won?t want generic fighting characters, and I am hopping I will get characters as wacky as the Guilty Gear series. I do have plans to end it the RPG when I feel it has boiled to just fighting, and I plan to add special fights like bosses, and that?s pretty much it.

Well, I hope I get some feedback now.[/QUOTE]


I like the story line for that story, it sounds like Hellboy and The league of Extraordinary Gentlemen for some reason maybe for the fact that things happen in the past first ans some evil arises afterwards stronger and more evil. I like it, good story line. By the way I haven't read Kill Adam, I just can't seem to find it.
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[COLOR=Indigo][SIZE=1][FONT=Arial]Eh... I dunno... the story is good, but there isn't really much logic to the actual RPing bit. They create fighters. They fight. Err... tell me what this has to do with a demonic army again?

There is little indication from this info provided that the participants are trying to get to Leithen. It just seems like a sparring tournament. I mean, there isn't even very much reasoning as to [i]why[/i] they're fighting at the moment. Are they fighting so they can claim the bounty and not have it stolen? Are they fighting in a Tekken-style tournament to challenge the guy? Who knows.

But yeah. Thats my only qualm with it right now.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]
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