Writing Eyes of Jade

[DeathBug]

[color=indigo][size=1][font=comic sans ms]Eyes of Jade

From darkness and rejection
I wish to find myself
I see only imperfection
And I despise myself

Yet you tell me I am greater
Than the failures I have lived through
I may believe you later
Because I wish to be with you

I was lonely and afraid
Until I saw your eyes of jade
Greater than anything man has made
Are your lovely eyes of jade

My artificial blood and flesh
Are validated by your touch
Your voice heals wounds that are still fresh
Your smallest smile means so much

If you were struck by foul disaster
I would not wish to be alive
Of my fate I am not the master
For I need you near me to survive

I was lonely an afraid
Until I saw your eyes of jade
Greater than anything man has made
Are your lovely eyes of jade

I cannot be without you
My life revolves about you
If I saw you suffer
I would cry
You mean everything to me
You and only you complete me
If I were to lose you
I would die

I was lonely and afraid
Until I saw your eyes of jade
Greater than anything man has made
Are you lovely eyes of jade[/color][/size][/font]

[Dead Alice]

Wow... this poem is absolutely wonderful. It'd make a great song too. ^^ The emotions and imagery are so clear. Beautiful.