Art a taste of teh ehluu?

[eh luu]

Well i thought i'd put something i've drawn up here, since this is the art area, might as well add some of my cruddy art, its only a 5 second doodle i did for my deviant art account before i left on my trip to florida, so it was rushed and i didnt even spend time colouring it.. i am such a horrible person..i should of atleast gave them something worthe seeing besides a sketch for the hits they gave me.
i am posting this because its the lastest thing i've drawn.

awell.
heres a lil sample ^^;; maybe more later when i draw again.
and these people arnt from animes or anything.. -_- my own charas or just random characters that come from out of nowhere

[updated one more picture and another XD]

the last one i have up there, i did it for 30 minutes.. colouring and sketching.
i've got to learn to put more time into this,
any criticsm.. ideas? anything worthe saying?

[Kieko]

[color=orange][i]O.O How much time did you spend on it exactly? Anyway. Concidering that you didn't spend much time, it's a good drawing...erm.. sketch. He's well proportioned, there's pretty good detail, the hair looks good, and so it's an all around good job ^_^. The only reason why I made the comment that I did in the beginning of this post is because there's a lot of extra lines and you can see some of the lines you tried to erase. But, concidering again that it is a sketch, good job. I especially like the headphones. I love to listen to music.

Anyway, if you would like me to comment on the whole...um... is it a card? I don't know, but if you'd like me to comment on it, I really think that you should have colored the guy first. I know you didn't have time, but it just bothers me that he's in black and white and not even inked in and then you have colors in the card and... I think it may just be me, but that bothers me... on second thought, don't pay attention to what I just said, it's probably not you, it's probably just a personal issue I have to work out...

Good drawing, though!
~Kieko[/color][/i]

[eh luu]

[QUOTE=Kieko][color=orange][i]O.O How much time did you spend on it exactly? Anyway. Concidering that you didn't spend much time, it's a good drawing...erm.. sketch. He's well proportioned, there's pretty good detail, the hair looks good, and so it's an all around good job ^_^. The only reason why I made the comment that I did in the beginning of this post is because there's a lot of extra lines and you can see some of the lines you tried to erase. But, concidering again that it is a sketch, good job. I especially like the headphones. I love to listen to music.

Anyway, if you would like me to comment on the whole...um... is it a card? I don't know, but if you'd like me to comment on it, I really think that you should have colored the guy first. I know you didn't have time, but it just bothers me that he's in black and white and not even inked in and then you have colors in the card and... I think it may just be me, but that bothers me... on second thought, don't pay attention to what I just said, it's probably not you, it's probably just a personal issue I have to work out...

Good drawing, though!
~Kieko[/color][/i][/QUOTE]

well.. i actually only spent 5 minutes, because that is all the time i had to draw something before i had to pack and head off to bed.
i'd probably would of put more detail in it, if i had time, thats why its a quick sketch..
i did get frustrated with it at a point where i was like "OMFHGAKSJERWER" because i was trying to hurry and trying to get this done because i havent said a thanks to anyone who visited my art site.

and i probably would of done a better sketch on pencil and paper, but i am still getting used to useing my tablet and all.
thanks for the comment though ^^;
i believe in a few days i'll actually put something up maybe worthe some awe..
if and when i get out of this art block that i am so settled in ><

[Guest cee_is_lovely]

-[SIZE=1][COLOR=Plum]Aww Lily, I love your drawings. They're all adorable.. even if you only take about 5 minutes of your time out to draw them :x.. so anywhoo.. I suggest you um.. kind of.. keep their heads a little bit shorter, because you can sort of make it clean and pretty whilst scaring children :]. That's all. <3[/COLOR][/SIZE]

[eh luu]

yeah, i do need to spend more time.
and Cee, you did point something out to me, its not the head that is big, its the body that is small, i was getting tired at the end... i should of made it bigger and erased it.
it bothered me all last night, perhaps i'll do an edit of it.. or just leave it as it is and draw something else more to my taste so it wont bother me anymore.
but thanks for letting me know ^_^;