Writing Into a Dark Dream You Drop...

[Dead Alice]

(OK, so I took the title of this thread from American McGee's Alice. *sweatdrop*)

I decided to post some of my...better poems, but not all at once.

Cry (just as the title suggests...)

Sorrow within hollowness
Slowly bleeds in silence
From eyes too empty
Cold running blind to vanish
On rosy cheeks
Draining to be swept away
Dark like moonlight?s shadow
Burn away at flesh unstained
While melodies of horror play
Stripped of memory
Fill with angel?s tears
Sweet like wine
Cast breath into a lifeless form
Soul devouring the lungs
And drown me in redemption
Weak and broken glass

Constructive criticism is more than welcome.