Discuss Shadows of the Grave

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I need some help on my RPG that I've been making for the past month now entitled, Shadows of the Grave. The story takes place in a town called Darctal and the main focus is on these 'shadows' that haunt the town and kill the townspeople. A group of friends have decided to set out and find the 'keys' to destroy them. Hehe, many plot twists, etc., ok here's the legend,...........

[size=2]Legend of the Shadows: Yearly on the night of the glowing crescent, an icy air covers the town, sending chills into the bravest of men....The Shadows arise and kill those who defy them, always hungry for blood. These Shadows are mirror images of the dead, taking revenge for the outcast of the old, the betrayal they feel that was taken against them.....They can never die, they are an eternal plague that will hunt all in Darctal to their dooms. Only one way will they be destroyed, the keys of darkness and love, together it will get rid of them forever never to be seen again.

Any comments or suggestions are greatly appreciated. Thanx
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