Art My 3D Art Work "Leviathons" Rate it Plz!

[Guest Rofello]

Hi, this is some artwork I made with Cinema 4D and Photoshop, hope you like it! Rate it and leave any comment you want about it..... Cant get better without being critized right?

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[AppleCore]

Wow!! :eek: Thats absolutly incredible! How long did it take you to do that? The colors look great, it looks kind of snowey to me. Also it reminds of the aliens from the final fantasy film.

[Epsilon]

[quote name='AppleCore']Also it reminds of the aliens from the final fantasy film.[/quote]
[COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1]'Final Fantasy: Spirits Within'?

Absolutely stunning job, Rofello. It mixes a technical feel with something more flowing/spiritual. I really love the colors, especially on the bg. Mainly because of the sight morphed on the inner curve of where the entity seems to turn. Did a great job with the bubble like effects. Since they just sort of contrast with the shimmering white lights. A great idea with turning the image, making it more vivid and inserting it into the bg. Like a mirror.

I really like what you did with the numbers. Because the text seems to fit in perfectly. Especially where the three's sector branches off into the "86258183123". Speaking of which, I adore how you did the side line. Taking three different parts and focusing on them with Clouds, Luminary, Screen lines, effect. So that they have another feel. A great choice on font for pretty much everything. And I like the way you've chosen to place, "Rofello Designs" and Leviathons."

But there are a few problems. The two biggest to me is the spacing on "86258183123." Some of the numbers has gotten mashed together, making it harder to read. The second is how the is all the "F's, E's, I's, G's, and S's" look a bit off. Mainly because of how they hit the color changes. And the lights fluctuating.

Other then those two things, you've done a wonderful job. Both in concepts and the production. [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Kinetic]

This is pretty good. Before I left, I never saw any good 3D work besides that of Psychotik's. It's all around a little faded, and I'd like to see it in a larger size, but I like the idea behind it. The color scheme is a bit off, but with a bit more tweaking (and some dodging in the grey technical areas would be cool), it would be alot better. Learn a little bit more about the composition of it all, and you will go far in the graphic community.