Guest Sean Posted August 9, 2004 Share Posted August 9, 2004 This is a Poem that i have just written, it just came to me whilst listening to a song, here is my Poem [CENTER]Sorrowful Lesson Here is my sorrowful cry Now my pain be brought to die Now my soul wil cry out to thee Please now endeth my misery [/CENTER] I know its short but it just something that touched me from a song, what do you guys think ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Una_Maxwell_02 Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 I like it. Especially when you delved into a lil of the olde English. ^^ Short is good--some poems are too long to enjoy. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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