Writing Mirror Manor (song)

[DetectiveMikeRS]

I wrote this for my friend and guitarist in my band who was having trouble with a girl he liked. Like all my works of writing, this is also copywriten. It has a very hard progressive rock tune. I would really like some input on this song.

Mirror Manor
(Written July 19, 2004
by Mike R. Smale
(C) 2004)

Is that really you,
is this really me?
Reflections in the mirrors,
are all that I can see.

I know you wouldn’t
do this to me.
And this act,
is just your fantasy.

And I don’t know, what this is all about.
I talk to you, but no words come out.

Escape.
Escape from the Mirror Manor.
Run away.
Run from what’s not real.

I know that you care,
but you simply ignore.
I want to know the truth,
but you disregard me more.

And I don’t know, what this is all about.
I talk to you, but no words come out.

Escape.
Escape from the Mirror Manor.
Run away.
Run from what’s not real.
Tell me.
Tell me what I mean to you.

And I don’t know, what this is all about.
I talk to you, but no words come out.

Escape.
Escape from this Mirror Manor.
Set us free.
Let me believe we can love.
Let me believe we can love.