Writing Ehluu is into poetry?

[eh luu]

kay first off.
XD talking in third person is just so much fun. cough.
second, these are all copyright to me.
kay read on..

alright so i decided to put up a few of my poetry.
i dont really specialize in this, i am mostly into drawing, but this is just something on the side i like to do

[CENTER]Tear stained face
collapsed heart
a pillow mixed with blood and tears

lonely nights
spent with yourself

the world is to busy to care
as you wither away into tears

cliched words
to cheer ones soul

but you know your place
to be alone

anxious emotions
of finding some one
as it comes to be no one

why does the world seem so?
so determined for you be alone? [/CENTER]

and then we have the next one ... this one is a more recent one i wrote.

[CENTER]Differences climbing
dividing you and me
Scary Scenarios,
your existence is futile
wondering what happened

why am i so alone again?
Why are you gone again?
Not telling me whats wrong again?

slipping from grip
is a friendship almost lost
then i am there
holding on again

why are you gone again?
falling away again?
ignoring me then?

dealing with you
as you pretend i don't exist
as you run away from us

do you really care?
is this really a friendship?
whats next, when you don't exist?

you're gone again
and i am here again
trying to hold on
your grip is failing...

are you gone?
do you hear me now?
you're gone now
i am alone again now[/CENTER]

the last one is written with a different style then i usually write.
but comments and such would be well accepted.
- Lily