Art Care to see my art?

[Dead Alice]

Hello all... I've finally decided to post some stuff up out of boredom. First I'll put up a sketch I did a few hours ago. It's Miho from MegaTokyo. I used my graphic novel for reference, and I'm hoping it looks ok. Please comment, and let me know if you want to see more. ^_^

~Chaos~

[Syk3]

[QUOTE=badjesus]Wow thats really good i wish i could draw like that.
i would send in a peice i just finished but it would probably be locked out.[/QUOTE]Refer to the sticky at the top of this forum on Constructive Criticism. Something tells me that you didn't look through it. ;)

[Dead Alice]

Erm... I guess I could take that as a compliment. ^^; I'll put something up I did today (or...yesterday). It's a little angel I drew for my mom. Ain't she cute? ^^

[badjesus]

To syk,
its not that the drawing is a little offensive I mean some people don't like to see a picture off a man commiting suicide with a handgun with "suck on this" written in the corner I will see if I can put it on my site though.

[Syk3]

[QUOTE=badjesus]To syk,
its not that the drawing is a little offensive I mean some people don't like to see a picture off a man commiting suicide with a handgun with "suck on this" written in the corner I will see if I can put it on my site though.[/QUOTE]I think you missed the point of my post. I wasn't reffering to your statement about your drawing at all; I was talking about your comments on the art piece, which were extremely vague and needed a little more explanation. ;)

[Dead Alice]

Thank you, Syk3. I'd like someone to actually comment on my art... v.v;;

I might as well put up one of my favorites...

[Katana]

[QUOTE=xXchaosfaerieXx]I'd like someone to actually comment on my art... v.v;;
[/QUOTE]
[size=1][color=RoyalBlue]Then I shall make you happy! ^^

[b]First -[/b] WAGHH!!! SO CUUUTE!!! :D So sad, though. Really cute, though. Okay, lemme clear my head...
The head seems a tad out of perportion (egh...sp?) to the body, but not much. I really like the eyes and the markings below them. The hair is really cool too.
[b]4/5[/b]

[b]Second -[/b] Woah. The eyes are, er, freaky, in a sense. Sorry, but they definetly creeped me out when I opened up the pic. The wings are spiffy, and I like the shading on them (blue is the way to my heart...)
Don't get my wrong, I really like it - but the head is probably my least favorite part. The arms are really cool, though. I can't draw folds..wish I could.
[b]3.8/5[/b]

[b]Third -[/b] It's really good. I can only say personal opinion interferes with my rating - I'm not big on those, er, gothy kinda drawings (what are the words? *shrugs*). It's really good artisticly, however. In a weird way, she makes me think of a female Hiei with all of those black wrappings.
Is she like a Bunny Demon or sommin'? ?_?
[b]4.5/5[/b]

So, Amaya, when are you gonna draw that group shot? ^^[/color][/size]

[Fyxe]

[size=1][color=darkblue]Badjesus, [i]please[/i] continue with your little conversation with Syk via PM, it gets annoying to see people post so much when not even commenting on the art. Plus I would say that could insult the artist by any means.

Anyway, very nice work you have here chaosfaerie! (I almost want to call you Amaya! >.<)
But I like the first one, very cute! Have you considered coloring it? I'd love to see it in color, bring it to the next level. ^^
Now the second one, sorry, but I will have to agree with Katana on the eyes, when I first brought it up it gave me a suprise. I think perhaps they are just a little big, otherwise they'd be fine. The thing I think I like the most is the wings, I love wings, but alas I cannot draw them. I also like her clothes a great lot as well.
Now, the third one, I absolutly LOVE. It is a bit more my style I think. The only thing I think needs some improvment is the face, it seems a little off... like one side is longer than the other. But otherwise, her body design is lovely, I can't keep my eyes off her clothes... so cool. The ears are done very well too.

You are very talented Chaosfaerie, I look forward to more of your work! I think you have a strong point in bodies, the faces normally look a little off... but then again, no one can always make them look perfect, face frames [b]are[/b] hard to make look good. Another thing I like about your style, the hair, I always look at hair first, I don't know why... but yeah.

And I would also like to see that group picture as well! You'll have to post that up as soon as you get around to drawing it, if you haven't done so. ^_^[/color][/size]

[Dead Alice]

OMG, I love you guys. :eek: You're some of the only people who have actually given me real constructive criticism. THANK YOU.

Sorry about the group pic... I started one a few weeks ago, but I gave up on it because it just sucked. I should try again, but I need to find a more interesting way to fit everyone in the picture.

I do kinda have trouble with proportions, but I try to use guidelines. Maybe I should color the Miho pic.. I know I'll draw her again anyway. ^_~

I thought Suki-chan's eyes were cute... ;_; (yes I named her n.n;; ) I think I was trying to make her chibi, that's why it looks weird. I think I'll leave out the dark line inside her eye next time though; it scares me...

I love the third one too... I drew it back in May though, so maybe that's why her face is off. (I think her chest is too big...) I might redraw that one later... Female Hiei?? Now THAT's weird... :lol: I can't help it; I love bunnies and I love...[size=1]bondage...[/size] *COUGH* Yeah, anyway...

BTW Kat, you can just call me Kuri. ^^;

And "badjesus"-...argh. Leave my thread alone. *shakes fist*

SOOO... Now for something else... A design I made (my logo), and my "Ghetto Bunny". Enjoy!

[Fyxe]

[size=1][color=darkblue]Hello again. ^_^

Picture 1: I really like this design, it has a somewhat evil/chaotic aura about it while still having a sence of innocence if that makes any sence at all. :sweat: But this design is very clever having the base as a heart with the spiny wings sprouting out of the sides. And that thing on top, a halo, correct? To me it looks like a thorned halo, I don't know if that was the perpose, but that's what I get out of it.

Picture 2: GHETTO BUNNY! That's so awsome. I really like this one as well, I love her face! She is rather beautiful and has also has that cute quality about her. Her eyes, her hair-very shiney-, her nose, her outfit, I'm lovin it Chaosfearie. ^_^ I think I just like the concept of a Ghetto Bunny in gerneral, lol. The only thing that bothers me is her arm that bends, it seems a little to small, that's all. You must have a thing for bunnies, eh?

Anyway, once again, nice work! ^.^

::Lix::[/color][/size]

[Dead Alice]

Yes Lix, I do love bunnies. ^_^ (interesting name BTW...) Ah, I think I shall post another of my recent favorites... It's rather demented... oO I also have a poem to go with her, if anyone cares to read it. She's basically a homicidal ragdoll. ^^;

[Turdle]

Wow, I really like your style. The ragdoll thing reminds me of Sally from the Nightmare before Christmas, lol. I like it tho. I want to hear the poem that goes with her. But yea, keep it up I like all your other pictures too. I like the doll's clothes, your getting better with the proportions. Good job all around. My favorite is the fragile one. I also like Miho, she's awesome, color would be nice too tho.
~Ash~

[Fyxe]

[quote name='Turdle']The ragdoll thing reminds me of Sally from the Nightmare before Christmas, lol.[/quote]

[size=1][color=darkblue]I was just thinking the same exact thing. Heh, once it loaded my mind just thought SALLY!

Anyway, I really like this one. I would also love to read the poem that goes along with her. Your proportions are indeed getting better, to me, her body looks almost perfect. I love the clothes and the way you have stitches all over her, definatly the ragdoll feeling. And, jeez, I can't stop looking at her hair! >.< It's so cool. Lol. And, of course, you have your bunny in there. ;)

I love this stuff, keep it comin chaosfaerie!

::Lix:: (And thank you, it [i]is[/i] and interesting name, lol.)[/color][/size]

[Dead Alice]

Thanks for your comments, guys. ^_^ Here's her poem:

"Dying Doll"

She dreamed of life on puppet strings
Her heart a brittle thread
And though she bore no human flesh
Her fragile soul soon bled
Screaming hatred then became
Her frozen lips? remorse
For body mortal though unsewn
She chose the reaper?s course
Toys of deadly favor won
The sheathing at her side
And so she set her path for where
Unfaithful children hide
Images of horror played
Within the children?s heads
As death was brought in painful waves
And life flowed through her threads

I'm going to my mom's house, so I probably won't be able to go online for a week.