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[b]Once Upon a Legend: [I]Act I[/I]- Underground Thread[/b][/center]

[size=1]Welcome to the underground thread for [b][u]Once Upon a Legend:[I] Act I[/I][/b][/u]. In this thread, I will update the first post with notices and information and who is scheduled to post next. That means only one person should be posting at a time. Keep track of this thread for updates on the RPG, information you might need to read, and see if you?re next to post.

If you have questions, comments, suggestions, or just want to discuss OUAL, do it here. Please don?t spoil anything if you know further plot points. Thank you.[/size]




[size=5][b]Links:[/b][/size]

[u]Once Upon a Legend: Act I[/u] Sign Up Thread: [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=42142]Click[/URL]
[u]Once Upon a Legend: Act I[/u] Website: [URL=http://www.sweethypocrisies.com/whitebutterfly/dw/]Click[/URL]
[u]Once Upon a Legend: Act I[/u] RPG: [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=42926]Click[/URL]




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[size=5][b]Scene Index[/b][/size]

[b]Scene 1:[/b] Evermoore
[b]Scene 2:[/b] Guide For Hire




[size=5][b]Cast Members[/b][/size]

[b]Noah Isildo[/b] - [I]Dragon Warrior[/I]
[b]Deksan Rhames[/b] - [I]ScirosDarkBlade[/I]
[b]Krystal Evermoore[/b] - [I]inti[/I]
[b]Arkadiy "Ensis" Kyran[/b] - [I]DeathKnight[/I]
[b]Ava Faladir[/b] - [I]'hEvN[/I]
[b]Demeric Rilian[/b] - [I]Bio[/I]
[b]Jocelyn Renicore[/b] - [I]The_Ghost[/I]
[b]Liat Blesa[/b] - [I]Boo[/I]




[size=5][b]Staff Members[/b][/size]
[size=1]I?d like to give a big thanks to these following people (Aside from myself. That?d just look bad if I got all cocky). They helped make OUAL possible.[/size]

[b]Dragon Warrior[/b] - [I]RPG Director, Creator, Story Writer, Music Hoster[/I]
[b]Alan[/b] - [I]Website Designer[/I]
[b]Semjaza Azarel[/b] - [I]Site Hoster[/I] - [url]http://www.wrappedinplastic.net[/url]
[b]Hittokiri Zero[/b] - [I]Graphics Designer[/I]
[b]Enya[/b] - [I]Music[/I]
[b]James[/b] - [I]Inspiration[/I]




[size=5][b]Updates and Notes[/b][/size]

[i]September 6th, 2004[/i]- I just updated the cast list. Congrats to all who made it. The RPG will start later this week.

[i]September 26th, 2004[/i]- The RPG begins. Check back at this thread for information and when it's your turn to post.

[i]October 8th, 2004[/i]- The site was moved to another host. Weee!
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You don't have to design the clothes, it means. In Lo' Urden, a person always wears the clothes of the town they're from and therefore you won't have to explain their outfit. For Kalenbore, their clothes are an off-white trench-coat like deal over black robes with a black hood. So when making your sign up, you only must describe your character's features and maybe any extra items they possess such as a necklace.
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[font=Trebuchet MS]In my sign-up, I made a group of Mares virtually unafraid of the rings. I'm pretty sure this is okay (though a rare occurance), since you said that there were incidents in town even though they were protected by the mineral.

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[quote] Towns often have large rocks of the mineral to protect the town as a whole, but incidents have been known to happen. [/quote]

I'm sorry if I confused anyone with that. What I simply meant was in case the mineral ever ran out or something happened to it, the Mares would attack the town. There is no possible way a Mare can survive being near the material.

So, sorry, Bio, that'd go against the laws of Lo' Urden's nature =/ But you could replace those Mares with animals? Just don't call them monsters because in Lo' Urden, there really aren't any "monsters," just Mares and animal life.
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Kewlness DW- I just wanted to commend you on the most awsomest plot out ^^ If I can find the time, I'll be following the RPG all the way! I would've loved to join, but I have almost no spare time on my hands and my RPG skills are pretty darned rusty- I haven't been in one for over a year! Pathetic, ne? Anyway, hope you guys have lots of fun- make sure you finish this one, ok!!!
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[COLOR=RoyalBlue][SIZE=1][B]Lol. I totally forgot about the ratings, heh. My sign-up was too mature I guess. Sorry about that. ^_~ And yesh, that's a nice tip. I always doubt whether to put numbers or words in my writings. It's good that I got in anyway. ^_~

[COLOR=Purple]EDIT: I got bored of my own writing as well, heh. It could've been longer, mind you. I just restrained myself. You asked for history and I gave only a post for it, lol. ^_~[/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/COLOR]
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[color=#9933ff]Here are my comments to your critiques and all:

You merfer! *___* You change on people! X_x; When we all read the sign ups for the "history" section, it [i]specifically[/i] said, on the site, that if you character was very jovial or funny, you could use words like "*giggles*" in your sign-up. Stop changing the rules on people - I'll yell at you loudly if you do that in your next RPG.

Thank you for critiquing my profile - I'm really glad you did. I hope to be in your next RPG!!! ^_^ (er... maybe. We'll see. *_*)

Oh yeah, one last thing. People's eye colors [b]do[/b] change in real life. I swear to god - it's called [b]hazel[/b]. Thats what hazel eyes mean (not kidding). Normally they just change from brown to green, but they can change to any color. You know the OB member Luminaire? Well, she has hazel eyes, and they change all the time (you can even ask her. =P). I thought I remembered seeing them blue, once, and she also told me, herself, that one time when she was really angry, they turned purple on her. O_o; Either that, or she's the only person with eyes like that in the world... But I swear I'm not making that up!!! XD

Yah, thanks again, man, for the critique. Have fun with the RPG you guys! Oh, and good luck to "The_Ghost" - do justice to Spade 4!!! ^_^[/color]
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I have a few problem with your critique as well. I know I am not the best at spelling and grammer. Actually I missed most of first and second grade, that why it is bad like that. So I am glad you told me, because I am trying to improve it. Second I used giglges because laughing normally means like a fully hearty laugh in which it is normally loud. What I wanted to say was that she was laughing in a low manner with her mouth closed. Not loud for everyone to hear but to herself. I didn't know the word they would have used for that in the Medial ages so I used that. Lastly the eye changing thing. Like Mistress Roxie said people eyes change noramlly. I know because my eyes do all the time. My eye colour can change four to three times a day. Mostly when my emotions are very strong. Never had my eyes turn voilet but I wouldn't say it doesn't happen. Yes and it is called hazel. So no she isn't the only one in the world. There is at least two of us. I guess I am a freak, oh well.

Finally I want to say Thank you and I will keep in mind what you said in your critique for it helps me and like I said before I am trying to improve my spelling and grammer. I also want to tell everyone have fun.
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Aye, you mistook what I meant in the sign up.

[quote]If the character chuckles a lot, maybe put in a 'He he, ho ho' here and there.[/quote]

I did say this, yes, but writing out *giggles* is not what I said you should do. That's bad juju :< In fact, when I said the "He he, ho ho" part, I simply meant to express their jolliness through description. I guess I was a bit vague on that =/

As for eye color changes, I have friends that have hazel eyes and I never see them change. My friends suck :( And even if they do change, they change with mood? That sounds messed up XD You're your own personal mood ring.
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Comments about your comments:
First of all, I promise to work on the spelling and grammar. I will proofread all of my posts over and over until I can say them backwards and forwards (well, maybe not [I]that[/I] often, but you get my drift.)

I also misread the sign up, so I'll be taking out the "hee hee" and "hah" bits from my post.

I'm very sorry about the killing parts, my violent side was showing. :blush: I'll tone it way down for the RPG.

Also, I'm sorry about the second to last full paragraph. I must have written that part poorly.:sweat: She didn't trick them into thinking that she was Derrick, she just said she was married to Derrick. Since he was dead, she wanted to take his place as a spade. I figured it would be tough for her to get in because she was only sixteen and a girl. I'll try to fix it so it makes more sense. Also, she cut her hair as a sign of mourning, not trying to impersonate Derrick.


[quote name='MistressRoxie][color=#9933ff']Oh, and good luck to "The_Ghost" - do justice to Spade 4!!! ^_^[/color][/quote]

Thanks, I'll try! I pretty sure if you hadn't abstained from the running, you would've been in instead of me, so double thanks!
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Oh, good. I was hoping what you meant was that she just took his place. The idea of her tricking the Spades... yeah XD That'd be plain silly. The Spades would have to be fools. I'm also pleased you'll cut back on violence. But you must remember that there are battles in this RPG. Just not largely gory ones ;^D

Folks, I updated the first post of this Underground thread. Weee!
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[font=Verdana][size=1][quote][/size][/font][size=1]I did notice his life story is a tad cliche too. The whole "mother and father dying" bit has been used waaayyy too often.[/quote] [size=2][font=Trebuchet MS]

Ah, but who says they are dead? There wasn't any trace of them other than those three trinkets. No blood, just trinkets. My character [i]assumed [/i]they were dead. ^_~

That was my point in there not being any trace of them, though I suppose I didn't really write down enough for anyone but myself to know that... Their fate remains a mystery. ^^;

[b] EDIT:[/b] By the way, if you're lacking any [i]Enya [/i]music, I have the entirety of [i]A Day Without Rain [/i]and a single ([i]Caribbean Blue[/i]).
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  • 3 weeks later...
Thank you for the offer, but I am stocked on the soundtrack for Once Upon a Legend :) Be fully aware that not all the music will be Enya. And my bad about the parents ;^D I only assumed ^_^

And I didn't see Kittychanann's post :^O Bad me. To comment on what you said about giggles, I'm just saying that using the stars "*" was the wrong thing to do, not expressing giggles (though "He he he" would still be a bit odd).
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EDIT: The RPG is now up! Wee! Sorry for the wait. Lots of stuff going on for DW. :(
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[font=Trebuchet MS]Just a few questions...

How do we know when to post, exactly? Is there an order in which people post, or something that needs to be done during that time?

[i]Or [/i]are we just supposed to turn our brains on and use common sense...? ^^;

EDIT: Riiight. I figured it was written somewhere. XD
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[COLOR=RoyalBlue][SIZE=1][B]Eh, I'm not DW but the next poster is written in the first page of this underground thread. inti's next to post ^_^

Now my question for DW is when are we suppose to use the journal stuff. Is it required or something? Thanksie. [/B][/SIZE][/COLOR]
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I will post either tomorrow or the day after. I've been studying for the GRE (which is tomorrow at 8 am) so I've been too busy to devote a whole lot of time to a nice RPG post (DW mis-timed his first post as far as [i]I[/i] am concerned, lol).
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