Writing Beach of Memories (song)

[DetectiveMikeRS]

This is my eigth song (I'm not posting in an order). It's a short progressive rock song, the guitar is powerful but bass is more of the lead instrument in this song. I would really appreciate some input.

Beach of Memories
(Written August 15, 2004
by Mike R. Smale)

Tales of long ago,
are reflected in the sand.
The seeds that the present sow,
echo throughout this land.

Images of days gone by,
come to life along the shore.
Showing every truth and lie,
and days of peace and war.

The Beach of Memories,
everyday we live is here.
The Beach of Memories,
every laugh and every tear.

The lightest hours,
the darkest sins.
What’s exposed here
shall happen again.

The Beach of Memories,
every laugh and every tear.
The Beach of Memories,
of every hour, of every year,
everyday we live is here.